
they gave the seme such a heavy background that the way everything regarding his sister was resolved in one chapter felt unnatural. Im a little disappointed If they were going to solve his problems so quickly i feel like the seme’s past could be written differently yk? So that the pacing doesn’t feel like we’re sprinting towards the end of the story. + And even the uke witnessing the seme cheating on him & then hearing the seme’s explanation for what happened like two seconds later is just too unrealistic considering getting cheated on is his literal struggle/vulnerability regarding his past relationships.
Obvi im js pointing out how the pacing is really fast now. I still like the story overall tho so dont get it twistedd lolol
CARLLLL BABYY