
Are you kidding me!! This was so painful and boring to read...They had to drag the pace on and on and on ...almost all of the characters convo. were so depressing as of them had their own issues that were Only circled around the uke and seme and on top of that everytime they were about to have a smut scene they had to clip it! (its frustrating as it is) then they pull away from each other because of their UNCERTAINTY and HESITATION...soooooo boooring (its what the story was all made up anyway)
What really pissed me of the most was that i had to read 16 and a half chapters till they finally have a decent sex scene that it composed only with a few pages because there was still talk ,talk and talk and talk.

Hmm.. I like this story such hot smex if only if it wasn't censored and also this story needs a lil drama...like how logan would realize that daniel only hooked up with him as a substitute for sating his forbidden desires for his dad and then logan would get mad and bitchy then become obsessively possesive and rough daniel up because of this painful realization. Something like that... It'd be great!!

i am a full pledge ally of the uke's but for this.one (1st chapter) just fucking annoys me so much that i kept wishing hed die! The uke.was so dumb and stupidly insecure its unbearable..irritates me so much! Urghh!! I feel sorry for the seme though i will admit that the seme is at fault too for not saying his feelings a lil sooner that it escalated things but im still on his side for this story and as for the second one i hated like seriously H.A.T.E main reason for me was because the eldest(ukes bro) who i thought was (and is the most suited to be ) a seme turned out to be the uke!! Pissed me off like hell!! I was about to drop it but then i realized that it was the last page .. Now that i think about it! I disliked both the brothers for diffrent reasons Hah!
I did like the first story though and would have loved it if the uke wasnt such a brat!
wow..things just got interesting I'm looking forward to how that guy who likes urabe would think of him after that convo. he just heard ...(eavesdrop)
Will his feelings of love towards urabe remain ? Or will he lose interest after witnessing him in a different light ?
Of course he's gonna lose interest asap, he idolizes the guy and calls him 'prince' in his head, when he finds out the guy is actually a piece of crap he'll be done with the guy right away.
Sure...you have a point...but its still to early to say ...i mean the guy harbors unrequited love for urabe for quite a long time (who knws how long) He cant just throw it out the window in a snap just because he showed a little bit of his bad side, urabe has his reasons as we all knw why hes acting that way (pretty heavy reason that that led his parents to divorced and his life turned to shit !) although i think its inexcusable..