I was so down for this concept but the story and characters were at best mid. I don't expect much from such a short story but the uke apologising somehow grinded my gear because he was clearly the one being exploited more. Like the seme is cold but I wish he weren't written that cold you know what I mean? Like come on apologise to your bottom. Ahhh well I wish there was some better story with similar crossdressing top and beefy bottom lol.
Man I was rooting for the storyline but the end was kind of a bummer. They rushed it so much in the end. There's clear gaping holes in the story. Like OMG I wanna know more about their past ughhh. What about the 2nd and 3rd lives?! The story was good but the rushed ending ruined it.
I mean the couple is really cute but the r@pey thing I wish it was a bit longer so that things would progress a bit naturally or if they showed that there was already a bit of the sexy tension before the act. idk
I was so down for this concept but the story and characters were at best mid. I don't expect much from such a short story but the uke apologising somehow grinded my gear because he was clearly the one being exploited more. Like the seme is cold but I wish he weren't written that cold you know what I mean? Like come on apologise to your bottom. Ahhh well I wish there was some better story with similar crossdressing top and beefy bottom lol.