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soomin is so cute, bro esp his chibi MY BABY
also, is it just me or does the top low-key look/give off similar vibes as dooshik (pearl boy)

this gets worse and worse every week. i’ve genuinely only been reading it to see how it ends, but i just get more frustrated ALSO WHY ARE THEIR DICKS SO GODDAMN RED HAIBO

i only have three critiques:
1. why was there sexual assault thrown in, only for it not to be addressed? and for their first time to be directly after, and as a result of the SA (because sigmund got jealous and took it the wrong way, “if just anyone, then will i do” etc) was incredibly unnecessary. i’ll say it time and time again, but these bl authors LOVE to throw in SA/rape bc either they have a fetish, the readers have a fetish or both have a fetish for it

2. sigmund’s relationship with sigfried - definitely needed to be more fleshed out, and for them to have some more closure. this ties in with my third point, that it needs to be longer, but there definitely needs to be more chapters with brunhild bringing up sigfried’s insecurities and worries up to sigmund, who then should sit down sigfriend and ease his worries and doubts. i understand that sigmund also feels guilty and his own guilt and awkwardness makes it difficult for him to deal with sigfried, but shipping him off to a boarding school as well definitely doesn’t help. the two of them need to have an earnest heart to heart, and heal their wounds.

3. for sure, needed to be longer. this was a nice story, very cutesy, palate cleanser-esque. it definitely should’ve been a good fifty chapters to resolve everything. from the secondary couple getting together, brunhild’s father stop being an ass and letting them be a couple, telling us what happened to brunhild’s mother (is she dead? probably, since we’ve never seen her), sigmund addressing his sister and brother-in-laws deaths with brunhild, to brunhild becoming an official knight and just overall fluff between the mcs

overall, nice story

“one and only” okay satosugu

i’m ngl, i still don’t like ipsae. i didn’t like him at the start, and towards the last two (?) chapters, i started actually liking him, but eh not really

han-eum, that cutie pie. i love me a greenflag pathetic puppy top crybaby with a huge slong that can stab your heart - they’re the best type of top fr

can they just adopt yeonjoo already, he’s just a baby literally crying rn, i cant deal with the panel of him holding that picture HES A KID HES A BABY LET HO AND HAEBEOM BE HIS DADS MAN
also, their domesticity

only on chapter 19
but their hair colours aside (but i do feel like hosung bears a slight resemblance to till face wise), their personality dynamics with hosung being quick to get flustered, and lashing out at geumwoo, while geumwoo is all stupid smiles like an airhead, and being pathetic for hosung especially reminds me so much of a young till and ivan (though, ivan always remained stupid for till lmfao)

this really was such wasted potential. it’s clear the author was more interesting in writing sex, than fleshing out a good story.

we really waited until the very last chapter for them to get together, and that too, it ended up with sex. i expected the side stories to be some fluff, and fill in some gaps, but it was just MORE sex.

what about yi-hyun’s offer to study abroad? what about his mother, why do we never see her? does she even live with the kids? speaking of the siblings, yi-hyun’s younger brother shouldve ended up with seungwoo. also, making seungwoo pine after woojoo like that was low-key LOW-KEY very low-key weird of the author. like i know he’s 18 and everything, but why would you want to make a potential love interest be in high school while the mc is in university like? and the fact that they were childhood friends, but woojoo really couldnt gaf about seungwoo, GIVE SEUNGWOO A BREAK

also, making seungwoo a potential love interest was so dumb. woojoo went all the way to seoul for his crush, not seungwoo. shouldve just made woojoo do nothing while crush was away, and then he moves on right before the crush comes back from the military. that way, woojoo and yi-hyun still follow the events of the story, but in a timeline where the crush is discharged and when he comes back, it’ll create a bit of conflict when he bumps into woojoo again.

idk, it’s like you can just tell the author didnt put much thought into the actual story. no fluff, no domesticity, barely addressing yi-hyun’s ptsd - esp when he took the taxi to the hospital, oh my baby - like, why aren’t we focusing on plot?? i’m tired of bls only revolving around sex. if the author wanted to write smut so bad, write a short ten chapter porn story instead of writing this

mc is being so ridiculous. he can’t just maintain the narrative that he doesn’t want kids from the time from the time he met the ml , to suddenly changing his mind now. that’s something he needs to sit down and discuss with his husband, not randomly spring it onto him one day and DEMAND to have a kid, that’s not how that works. it wouldn’t just be mc’s child too, ml needs to be 210% on board with being a dad.

saying that driving is so dangerous that ml needs to give up his car keys is so stupid, my god. and ml coming and dumping all his keys PLS you can’t compare pregnancy, and all of its dangers, to freaking driving. and ml is so right too. mc is a recessive omega, mated and married to a dominant alpha. having a baby of a dominant alpha could do irreplaceable harm to him, if not killing him in the process - though, i very highly doubt the author would take this route.

and saying that starting a family is more important DONT FUCKING PISS ME OFF he went through so many grievances in the past, and finally went to uni only to want to drop out for a while to start and raise a family, fuck off. he already knows what it’s like to be an omega, and how horribly he gets treated, but sure. drop out of college to raise a baby, like an incompetent shithead

i love them both, they’re so ridiculous. joobin letting that man hold him casually, but getting upset at seeing yikyung TALKING to two girls and chilling w the ex is killing me THEYRE SUCH FOOLS also the shot of the ex and yikyung together OMDSSS

WOW.

i’m going to refer to pre-skar (all of the events before sasya met lord skar) and post-skar (after sasya met lord skar) in my review.

i had mixed feelings toward sasya pre-skar. coming from a world of nothing, having to fight to survive, i understand him not trusting karel blindly from the get-go and his apprehension. i feel for him, i get it. what i don’t understand is why he could be so indifferent toward karel sometimes despite them being in love and moving in together after karel caught up with sasya sitting at the bench outside the train station. i do think the events that transpired during the time they lived together was because of sasya’s disorder - besides mania (which was said in the later chapters), i do believe sasya had bipolar depression, taking into account his mood swings, inability to sleep, alcoholism, not being able to get out of bed etc. which, paired together with his rough background, let to him being so deeply dependent on karel and adding to his fear of being abandoned.

i understand that sasya was clearly mentally unstable, but it also frustrated me and hurt to see how he pushed away karel. i know i KNOW he wasn’t in a good mental capacity so i shouldn’t be complaining, but it was rough to witness how reciprocal love was coming off as one-sided with karel being hopelessly in love, and sasya made to seem as if he was being forced into it.

karel taking the hit for sasya’s crime, being locked up and forced to serve in the army, holy shit man. but the last thing i expected was sasya to leave karel while the poor guy was suffering with the only thing keeping him going was sasya’s love. that HURT. i really couldnt stand sasya at that point - like i didnt hate him or anything, but goodness me.

post-skar was low-key marvellous. karel still being in love with sasya, but behaving indifferently - giving him the cold shoulder, forcing sasya to feel what he’d felt for years. it was satisfying to see. and karel being a completely scarred up daddy OOOOH LAWD I LOVE ME A SCARRED MAN. HOWEVER, as nice as it was to see karel push back, he pushed back TOO MUCH. yes, sasya was terrible to him in the past every now and then, but that didn’t mean he could use gudin to sexually assault sasya. i haven’t seen anyone else mention this and it’s pissing me off. no because karel got jealous over lies gudin made, blindfolded sasya and almost let gudin almost have his way with sasya - ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOT?? i also dislike how he locked sasya up, literally, and then not too long after that, he goes on to say he’s getting married and “bye bye sasya, you needa get a move on with your life” OH THAT HURT. like i see you karel, not only are you doing it for your plan, but you’re also low-key getting revenge for those years sasya hurt you, BUT YOURE ALSO HURTING ME SCAR DADDY. oh and also the piercing, NO NUMBING CREAM, NO WARNING, BRO JUST SHOVED THAT THANG INTO HIS EAR AND HIS NIPPLE I WAS CRINGING AWAY FROM MY SCREEN AND CLUTCHING MY PEARLS I WAS MORTIFIED

anyways, i liked how things wrapped up. low-key, i STILL don’t even understand how karel serving for austria ended up with him being a double agent, and sasya being taken into custody like yes, i grasped everything but idk if it’s just me but like it’s so unclear to me how exactly karel got to that point. i know he was in the army (or whatever the fuck it was), got promoted twenty trillion times, got captured and tortured and was made to choose a new life where he served as a double agent. i just don’t understand exactly why he was so immensely important, yk. and like, lord skar quite literally appeared out of thin air, how come no one questioned him and his nonexistent past further like? idk man, but all that matters is that they got their happy ending.

i do think their story was tragically beautiful, and i hope that the spin-off gets illustrated into side stories, where it’s just pure fluff and happiness with sasya and karel - just domesticity and pureness, and everything they’d wanted for in the past but couldnt have. oh, and them being daddies to cutie pie charles URGHHHH, and have a scene where sasya tells karel why charles is named charles. like ik there was a scene where karel low-key caught onto it, but i’d love to see full-blown confession from sasya, that would be amazing

also, i fucking hate that rat ass bitch miss ramwhateverthefuck. and no, I DONT CARE if anyone has to say she was manipulated by karel, forced into the marriage that NAUR FUCK THAT HOE. i didnt like her at the beginning when she was following karel around like some hopeless puppy and hating on sasya for no reason, bitch you were forced to marry that nasty ass duke/count/whatever the fuck so you out of anyone should know what sasya went through but noooo, you were resenting him for no reason and then wanting to jump karel’s bones and force sasya out of the picture FUCK YOU YOU DUMB STUPID CUNT and then when she was reintroduced later in the story HELL NAUR LET ME THROW HER OFF THE SHIP LET ME FLING THAT HOE TO THE SHARKS

hope my darling levin is happy. didnt expect her and julian to be a thing, i was honestly shipping julian and george from the time george was introduced. like julian and him hadn’t even met ever, but i wanted hashtag georgian to be a thing fr. ALSO GEORGE WHEN HIS HAIR IS NOT SLICKED BACK??? LIKE HE WAS HOT REGARDLESS BUT HAIR DOWN, HUBBA HUBBA IM PREGNANT WITH HIS BABIES

omg okay, here’s the end of my long, blubbering rant, i just needed to get everything off my chest. i love sasya, karel, julian, george, levin, and charles so much. they’re all babies, i hope they all live good lives together MY BABIES I MISS YOU ALREADY