
I wish the characters were drawn with more emotion. In highly emotional and important plot points it's been a struggle to see what they are feeling when they don't speak. Taekyung has two expressions: poker face or crying. The reveal and fall out would be so much more satisfying if their expressions were more nuanced

Beautifully written and developed. It has so much heart. The only gripe I have though is that I'm still left hanging on Jimmy's past. I feel like we still know nothing about him, why he's estranged from his family or why he was similar to Ethan when he was young which is a shame to an otherwise satisfying end to their story.
this was... a bit over convoluted in my opinion. Everyone's personalities also feels really inconsistent and all over the place. It was an interesting read tho i guess lol