
Some advice
Take your time to translate the chapters as a whole. You don't have to rush to upload something every day. Just do it once a week or something like other translators do too.
Your English translations look good but try to fit the text in the boxes. It makes it easier to read if the text is behind a white background instead of a drawing background.
Keep up the good workლ(´ڡ`ლ)

"Pretending you forgot." My man, ask him if he actually forgot it. He was drunk when you guys did it for the first time. It's very common for drunk people to forget what they did while drunk. Don't go assuming that he's just pretending and properly ask him "Do you remember the time we touched each other?"
I'm taking this way too personal (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

That's exactly my point. He just assumed instead of grabbing him by the collar and actually asking him why he was avoiding him. There were so many opportunities to ask but instead he said "Did you really forget or are you pretending you did?" If a person actually forgot something they wouldn't understand a question like that

yeah but he wouldnt let jeongyoon respond, sometimes ppl will ask out of bitterness rather than asking straight up & even tho its frustrating for us as the readers, it makes a lot of sense for chaeheon to want to avoid being rejected twice tbh seeing as how desperate he is for even a little affection, especially since the way jeongyoon avoided him last time was probably traumatizing as he was under the impression that since yoonie was smiling & kissing him back they wld b closer the next day. its quite human of him, & the way the author wrote out yoonies inner monologue clarifies that chaeheon gave him multiple chances to indirectly confirm or deny it but yoonie never said anything yk? as annoying as it is, this miscommunication trope is done quite well imo :]
I don't think I like this arc and I seriously don't get why. It's like they are behaving out of character or something ┗( T﹏T )┛
I felt like the time really went forward in this arc
Usually it's all the same in manga like no feeling or involvement of the growing up process even thought its been months and years gone by.
Here, in this arc , it feels like akihito has grown out of his careless childish phase(like he had in the beginning)a little .
Hmm, that could be it. I think the problem I have is that he didn't really have a moment of realization of "I really have to start behaving now". He did have that a few arcs before with the drugs case, but that moment was so short, and after that he never thought of it again.
Now that I'm typing I think I know the problem. We know that they are doing all these things but we don't know what's going on in their heads. Like akihito said they should run away and Asami just accepted that and said let's do that. I feel like past Asami wouldn't have done that and would have given several reasons why that would be too dangerous. Like I like a supportive partner for akihito but the jump from we do it my way and I'll listen to everything you say feels too sudden
I'm reading way too much into this Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
Yeah that is true
Somehow I felt the need to know what Asami was thinking and why he decided to run away(technically they will come back thought after a few chapters lol)
It seems Asami does have another motive too in his mind
But reading into the story way too much is a privilege we have as readers so why not