Great concept over all, hot af, but I wish the second couple explored a dynamic different than the main couple. Otherwise, this is a lil gem of an omegaverse, and I like how the main alpha doesn't want a submissive, small, timid omega. They're such a power couple!
Fuck the uncle, he's a piece of diarrhea left inside a car in the hot sun.
Sena and Kamishiro compete for supremacy in their school attended exclusively by alphas.One day, how...
- Author: Okuda waku
- Genres: Yaoi / Smut
Wait wait, this did NOT just end when Haru got a super intense heat with wetness dripping down his legs, WHYYY would they not draw that super hot sex scene?? This is too short, literally we only got to see them come together, and that's it. Basically unfinished. What a shame, the story is too good to be this short
Rereading this because it's a masterpiece that has a special place in my heart
Strictly Omegaverse no animal or futanari!
The art style improvement towards chapters 60+, tho, wow. That sex scene was actually good.
So basically, a recessive alpha wants to be loved for who he is, not what he does and has attachment issues because of it; a dominant alpha wants to be loved for who he is, not the expectations projected onto him (by Dylan), so he kinda has attachment issues, too. I say they match their (mental) freak.
The flashbacks got annoying at times, but they fill in the story and create a red string for readers to follow the evolution of their relationship, so whatever, I see the purpose.
The sex scenes are surprisingly sterile, I don't feel much of the passion during sex, which both of them display otherwise in their intense interactions. I guess the art style is partially to blame. Sometimes, the anatomy is wonky af, too.
This could've been great, actually. The dialogue was on point, although a bit dragged at times. They main characters are pretty, especially Colton, but the eroticism and intensity wasn't there in their physical /sexual interactions. What a shame.