I’m usually impatient but I don’t mind the slow pacing of this story since I’ve dealt with these types of stories before. I love the concept and think it pretty cute so far. I’ve dealt with stories that I at first thought were yaoi/BL and turned out not to be but the plot kept me on board. Kinda like Nanohana Boys. The only bad thing I can say about this story is the flashbacks. They’re too dragged out and can leave the reader bored.
I’m honestly quite mad at the people saying,” I’m confused at who the main character is” or, “was this not yaoi?” Like I get it you like smut and don’t read anything else besides yaoi but come on mates. It’s not that hard to understand stop being dramatic. It’s rude and makes you seem like a dumbass. If you don’t enjoy it why did you keep reading it until now??? You know you were interested in when/if they were going to get together. (Honestly I am too.)
I hate stories like this the most. I tried to get through the second chapter but I just couldn’t. I hate yaoi logic so much ughhh! This story made me loose brain cells I swear.... I don’t recommend but to each their own I guess.
This is why I barely read omegaverse. Sometimes they are the worst stories I’ve ever read. I have a strong dislike for Omegaverse if you couldn’t tell. I’m so sorry Author!
I don’t really care translation wise tho since I can make sense of nonsense since it’s happened WAY too many times. You did your best Translator.(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
careful about this one tho! it does delve into rape in the very first chapters :/ just caution warning about that (+ gang rape) it’s triggering bcs it does show what happened & the reactions of people are super gross,,,
but yes after that whole part it becomes a healthy and super wholesome relationship
For the people saying it’s just fiction,
You liked seeing a kid getting fucked up the ass? Cause that’s what I’m getting from you when you defend child porn. Even if it’s not real it’s still gross.
If I told someone I watched gay porn they’d call me weird but if I said I watched gay CHILD porn I’d be in jail. Ya see how you’re in the wrong here? You’re defending child porn. Even if it’s fictional it’s still gross.











I’m rating some of the top doujins! I will rate out of 10! This is purely for fun and my opinion so don’t take it too seriously! Im a little bias since I don’t like smut that much but let’s get it started!
First off I don’t like the ships but that doesn’t matter! I’m only here to rate story and smutty scenes!
No points deducted!
It has some type of story but I can tell right away the main focus is sex! I personally like an interesting story to go with my smutty scenes. I also feel like it could have been longer so that’s two points deducted!
Nothing else really caught my eye so I’d get I’ve it a solid 7.5/10! Smut was GREAT if you’re into that. Sorry people who like plot! I’d like to hear other’s opinions also so please comment!
This is so funny-
I don't agree but I really appreciate the fact that you took the time to analyze this thing lmao.
I’ve got so much free time! Plus I’m bored as hell so I might as well! It’s ok to have different opinions as long as it’s not hurting you or other people! Have a swell day mate!