
This was such a simple story and I love it but I wish it was longer.
I know what's missing too.
It's jealousy.
Not like full on unnecessary drama but a little jealousy to see more of Ryohei's character. Ryohei has been almost the exact same throughout the whole story and that's why his feelings don't feel genuine. Plus black hair has been shy all throughout the story so it doesn't really feel like they're in a actual relationship.
If there was more development I feel like this could be perfect.
What if Emilyko was a traider without realizing it? That's why nobody remembers her. She could be related to the Grand Master and he kept her.
Or her family gave her up an she stayed at the place all her life.