Okay, but hear me out. What about an experienced sub and an unexperienced dom? Every bdsm story I've read it's the other way around. Or honestly at this point give me two experienced people I don't think I've even read a story like that. But yeah this bdsm kinda ass
There are some I’ve read but they aren’t always yaoi. Domverse has some with the sub more experienced than the dom. Theres also one where the sub pretends to be a dom and uses a safeword as if it’s a command in order to keep up the rouse. He does end up coming clean because he has a dom. It’s a really good one!
this one has that it's one of my personal favs but the MCs back story is depressing af https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/hitomebore_shita_hito_ga_do_m_datta_mono_de/
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/sabsama_shitsukeno_jikandesu/
^ this is the one with the Domverse (sub uses safeword as a command)
In the middle of reading it, but i gotta ask. Was it really necessary to make him 17? Like make him a senior instead or at least don't make them have sex Ik 4 years isn't a big age difference, but as a 21yo myself I can't ever imagine dating a 17yo. Although I can tell Naoto is feeling big time guilt over it lmao
Ugh it feels like Lyle is still so insecure in this relationship and is scared to do or say anything. Like yes while he isn't good at communicating with Ash, imo if Ash doesn't see that Lyle is insecure, he's an idiot. And if he does, even worse. The power dynamic really irks me. Lowkey choosing to believe the side story doesn't exist or is an AU or smth
I think it's because soon we will get to see them get In bdsm it's not something that anyone like Lyle would be able to take right away like as if it was nothing so the author is slowly carefully bringing it up into the story and eventually Lyle shouldn't Shy away from saying dirty inappropriate things
There gotta be a way to introduce it so it isn't dubcon though Ik Ash said that he is gonna get more freaky, but bdsm or dom/sub relationships in general always need explicit consent and willingness from both partners (well sex overall needs that too anyway). While Lyle in essence indicated that he's fine with it, a yes then doesn't mean a yes now. What Ash did was just throw a temper tantrum without considering or trusting Lyle











I get u Fabian, I wish I could finish school too... 5th year of high school rn