Overall the work is decent but the uke is kinda dumb. So is the seme. The uke didn't even go far from the seme in terms of leaving him, (mans was a car ride away), he also could've fought back more considering the fact he went to military, and in retrospect he could've refused to go into the car,, I'm sure he was with the seme long enough in the past to know what was going to happen. The seme expects too much of the uke and is fucking stupid for not understanding why the uke left in the first place, not to mention the seme knows the uke's alibi made no sense, yet dismissed it not because he believes the uke but because he feels the uke will have some loyalty to him, therefore trusting him: a mistake he's already been proven dumb for doing and is doing it again just to get some ass.
You tryna rob a house and you see a lil baby so you pick that lil dude up and it fucking blasts your face off.
I guess it was cool but my dude side character ain't deserve that kick to the head when he legit is nicer to the uke than the seme is
I can't wait til she realizes he don't want nun