Whenever I think about the plot for more than two seconds it annoys me. Why would you go undercover with a person you’ve met before ?? Of course he recognized the MC. At least the ML called him out right away, it would have been insufferable if the author dragged it out for several chapters
And even though the MC is supposed to be a spy (?), he feels too naive and incompetent for it to be believable. If author wanted to make him weak and clueless, just make him a regular civilian not a spy
It’s impossible for me to believe Joohyuk truly feels and remorse for the way he’s treated eunoh. We saw what happened last time he apologized and it seemed like there would finally be progress with his character. when eunoh still rejected him he raped eunoh for three chapters in a row. We already have seen that he hasn’t changed
Joohyuk doesn’t actually care about eunohs wellbeing or autonomy. He only wants eunoh to reciprocate his feelings. After this atrocious kidnapping arc, I hope Joohyuk finally leaves eunoh alone
Jihan always pushing the sunbae away and rejecting a more serious relationship was already valid, but with this extra context it makes even more sense. Despite his first relationship in high school, Jihan started to trust and fall in love with the sunbae. But then he caught the sunbae with some girl. The same exact scenario as the high school bf.
Even if it was because of the mom, even if it was a misunderstanding, that doesn’t matter. His trust was completely shattered, and all of Jihans fears and anxieties surrounding love were confirmed.
if the sunbae sent ONE text to jihan about having to cancel their plans last minute, this situation could have been avoided. He could have properly explained the situation (assuming it actually was a set up date by the mom). Jihan probably would have started dating him.
But he didnt. He’s lucky jihan still has sex with him. He needs to accept that jihan will never trust him again and move on
I want to meet the author and ask what they were thinking. Why would they ever draw that. It doesn’t fit within the rest of the manhwa.
Joohyuk raping eunoh for three chapters is unfortunately in character for him. He’s done that ever since the first chapter. It was still uncalled for and drawn in an unsettling way, but it (unfortunately) made sense. I was horrified and hated those chapters, but I’ve had enough time to process them.
This chapter??? Having a gang rape “dream” sequence???? I have completely lost faith in this author and this story. My expectations have completely disappeared. I didn’t even care that it was a dream, this seems like something the author would actually make happen to eunoh.
If the author had a rape fetish, make a seperate story centered around that. Make a fully toxic yaoi, I’ll read it and enjoy it. Don’t put it into a relatively average predictable love triangle story. When we start a story like this, we’re not expecting scenes like this.
I used to look forward to this updating each week, but now I don’t care.
I’ll still read. I still care enough to read weekly, but it won’t be the same. I still like dochan, but I can’t find myself caring about the ending. Dochan is trapped in a story with this creator that so obviously doesn’t care about what they are making. I can’t even reread previous chapters, these past four loom at the front of my mind.









Tbh if the son died I wouldn’t care. I’ve hated him since the first chapter, and he’s gotten more unbearable as the story continued