
I finally found the strength to drop this. It's too dumb and the smut is never coming im being teased. I can't do this anymore lol.
The "we are in danger" thing can easily be fixed with guards. Y is she so dumb. I mean it might be a bigger than her but the world doesn't have magic... I think so the problem isn't that bad. Plus the love situation is too far gone u can't change it and she has no fallback. Also not very considerate to the man she likes because she is trying to hook him up with another random he hasn't shown interest in for real yet. I quit (╥﹏╥)

I think this was better in the beginning. At some point our sister twin became a stupid damsel and the boy twin just better. I mean the girl was supposed to be older and smarted how did she become like that. They save other illegitimate children... Really?! I want fights and adventure.I feel like their conflicts here are weak. I'm honestly bored. I am dropping this tho the beginning was Soo good.

I'm so mad!! This was so good pls give me more I need side stories. I need to see them open a cafe or get a job and adjust to the outer world. I want hims to see the ocean and go to France and so much more. Maybe see a cat for the first time. I need more. But this was amazing. Plus I wanna see his reaction to a city."
This has a 10/10 rn
Now it's down to 6.7 whoever that one person who voted this as a 10 is probably the first to read this
It did not take long it's been 3 minutes