
So disregarding all the warnings I thought I would give it a try but I think I've already lost more than half of my braincells. We got a similar "ranway father with debts" trope . Like I feel that those money lenders are the biggest fools in yaoi-verse , they always lends money to those people who can never pay them back (even a huge amount) only to force their child to pay them back ?? (Like wtf)
Anyway lets come to the main point, where I lose my braincells . Our mc just opened the door while two men were enjoying their time , okay I get it . But just HOW slow motionaly was he falling that the other man who was doing snusnu have the time to pull out his d!ck - then run towards the door - then to catch mieum ?????????

Girl I also don't know what to tell you , i was just stating my experience in first chapter and saying how dramatic was the "fall" scene was....I don't think I complained. And I would never complain in this types of story cause I know what am i reading and every story in unique in their own way . Moreover I think we should never complain about a story cause its totally depends on the author, as readers we should just keep reading and if we don't like it then stop ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
This has so much potential but they make mc so powerless , even though he has lie detector.
It would be more good if mc was more tough .......