any smut scenes that heavily rely on quoted moans: "ah, ah..... AHHHHH!" or "hnnggg I'M COMINGGGGGG" or "oh god, oh go-ahh, yes, yes, right there omg hng, ah-ah-ahhh"
like damn man.. just describe it in one line, no need to quote the moans too.
fuck that shit is embarrassing to read.
