
The story...is boring. 34 chapters in and nothing really has happened. There are lot of speculations that have opened, but the plot has not moved forward even a little bit. She exists in someone else's body. She assumes she has found the protagonist of the story. That's about it. If the story could've finished with the whole red head confusion and then, introduced the new confusion of her father and the other guy...the story would've been better off. The idea of putting in a lot has just made this story have nothing to root for. Like...34 chapters in, and this is the first time I see my fellow readers not having an opinion on any characters. That must mean the story has not been able to pull us all in. Not yet.

You are so very adorable considering your excitement and love for the story. Keep at it! It's your first time...
However, there are already other translators working on this story so find another story you can work on. Also, the quality of the manga is important. It makes it a good read.
Good luck for all your future endeavors!
I'm crying. Such a brilliant story! Too brilliant. Too brilliant. And the choice of what to draw. Every scene and dialogue is placed so compellingly!