
Bro I hope to everything that the sex scenes of ml and fl will be even better than the ones we’re getting of this cheating bastard and random chick. Because I’ve seen it too many times where the mc gets these detailed and long scenes with a sexfriend but with the character they get with it’s half assed of short.
Sure it’s not the same scenario for this story but it’s giving you’ll get hot chapter at the end and it will only be two. I just don’t want to be disappointed also I hope mc does not have a ykyk scene with cheating orange here

Not gonna lie I’m kinda getting tired of having a flashback every two second lmaooo maybe it’s just because we have to wait for a while for chapters and all that’s waiting is a flashback that could be done in one chapter but is prolonged lol

Bruh you can’t be seriousshe can draw flashbacks that last 10 chapters if thats the pace she wants (im still gonna read and enjoy) I was just stating that it’s getting repetitive cause I feel like the story can continue smoothly with some left out. Also it could kinda be done in one chapter cause some scenes don’t add anything technically but idk what others deem important . Honestly if you really think about it my comment is a solution not to tire herself out lol and I’m just impatient cause I like the story and I want to see what happens in the present

I like that she is giving context to the characters' actions, it makes us empathize with them. Is so easy to judge Cirrus ans Chan-il friendship (i do) because it hasn’t been shown much.
Personally i had many questions, why didn't Chan-il know about Cirrus's mother death anniversary? Why did he never go to his house if they're best friends? Why did the pig thought he could use Chan-il?
Cirrus past gives for several chapters, but i agree it'd be better if they were together and not between the present because those jumps distract from the main story and other unresolved issues like Cirrus father, the fatty, Cirrus crying and so on
Lost in the cloud feels more like the story of Cirrus and Skylar lives and their way to adulthood than a love story.
See y’all in five chapters cause I can’t deal with the probabilities of this backfiring and having to wait on the edge of my seat for the next update lmao