if they spent less time fucking and more time traveling they probably would’ve made it to the gate and escaped the city by now ╮(￣▽￣)╭
i hate the seme. HATE him. i also can’t believe they showed THE ENTIRE rape of the uke BY THE SEME.. and then they just MOVE ON?! CASUALLY SEGWAY TO THE SEME DEADASS STALKING THE UKE?? fuck this man. i really like the art.. and shit i love an obsessive/possessive seme but i HATE ists.
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why can’t the FL just live her own life and figure out what SHE wants without being pressured by her family and even her (new) friends??? like- “omg now that ur trying to break it off w ur fiancé who are you gonna end up with now??” LET HER HEAL FROM HIS INFIDELITY FIRST!! I understand the political nature of it- but her brother can marry a rich lady and bring honor to the family that way- and he’s gonna work for the fuckin crown prince so he’s gonna get hella honor and money anyway!
FL spent her life with pretty much no family (aside from the servants.. who had to keep a certain distance from her bc the classist hierarchy n shit). neglect REALLY fucks with the brain and how people process trauma, but i doubt this author knows/cares enough to include her working on her issues. she’ll just end up with either the prince (who clearly doesn’t know proper reptile husbrandy smh smh) or the duke (typical)- and “fix” her issues by being with them (“oh wow i got the love i needed <3” instead of “i love myself, and before my family n shit i am ME”. this story is just a continuation of her life without choices, she WILL end up with one of those men.
she’s sweet.. perhaps too sweet. the staff treat her like shit (like bro- they’re PAID to serve you, fuck the curse get that BREAD). ML doesn’t know how to express emotions (typical) and is off to a ROUGH start with the FL. she’s there to SAVE HER FUCKIN COUNTRY, and he’s like “>:( fuck you!” like- c’mon man, act like a fuckin future ruler and hear her out.
there’s only 4 chapters so i don’t wanna fully shit on the series, but i hope the FL grows a backbone and starts standing up for herself
i mean.. like.. it’s not great. it’s quite bland. has the hella possessive ML, overprotective bro, and the “villainous family” trope FL. idk what it is about this story that just has me like（￣へ￣）
like ma’am if ur bros attitude bothered you that much why didn’t you try to run away before? she was just like “yep my bro’s possessive, can’t escape the tower :(“ for her whole childhood. like babe- ur a “genius” like ur brother you could’ve found a hole in the towers barrier or straight up destroyed a side of it to escape and go out on the town. OR better yet, summon ur own fucking beast and use it to get out of the tower (like a bird or some shit). the FL lacks character. she just sorta exists, and now bc she has the ML on her side she’s like “NOW imma run away >:D” (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Kinda, but i kind of get her too, i mean being alone out in a world youve really never seen can be hard, maybe scary...i might give it a little more time to see where it goes, now is when she needs to developed as a character
fuck the ML and all the other men around her. i imagine learning that the “spy” you captured was just some depressed ass woman who transmigrated.. AND YET YOU STILL SAY SHES A SPY? omfg i just hate shit like this. none of the signs (aside from her being “near where the spy got away”) point to her being a spy. any investigation would show she doesn’t fucking exist in this world. god. it’s not even “enemies to lovers” it’s “abuser to lover” and that’s unhealthy as fuck.
wtf was she wearing to that nice ass dinner? be late to the dinner if it means you can clean yourself up- because idek if she showered after her hookup, she prob showed up smelling of sex, lookin like she just rolled out of bed. like c’mon man. and the pasties?? why?? (〜￣△￣)〜
and the WILD amount of smut.. and her cringey as fuck outfits, i really like the design of the “twisted ones” and the overall premise is really neat. tbh i think this story could be good, the world is interesting, the MC has a cute color scheme and cool horns, a fun(ish) personality and there’s good chemistry w the ML(s). BUT her hypersexualization lowkey ruins it. like c’mon what the fck is she wearing 90% of the time? her biddies and are practically side characters with how much screen time they get.
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if a woman wrote this story, i would be a little surprised like come on girl
i’m HOPING a man wrote the story because i can be like “ugh yeah, typical men,” bc if a woman wrote this I’d be like “NOOOO POOKIE WHYYYYY, WHY YOU DOIN YOUR SISTERS LIKE THIS?!”
neat concept. also,
FUCK THE POPE. FUCK THE ENTIRE RELIGIOUS ORDER! I hate that i like his color scheme.
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HE JUST WENT FOR IT- i feel bad for his ass :,)