instead of stereotypical: FL “oops i accidentally roofied you” ML: “bro wha?” *sex*
the ML is manipulative as fuck and has been tryna “escape” the friendzone for ages.. and bc the cookie roofies wouldn’t even work on him the ML pulled out a LEGIT aphrodisiac then said it was the cookies to lowkey/highkey coerce the FL into a relationship.. “look what YOU did,” “i’m like this because of YOUR cookies.” TEXTBOOK MANIPULATION. ML didn’t even really try- crack open a romance novel to learn, then WOO YOUR “IMPRINT” instead of being a CONNIVING BITCH.. the smut is decent ig, it’s just thigh fuckin rn (chap 6), ML doin lots of servicing and the FL is doing some.
this ML is FUCKING TRASH!! IVE ONLY READ TO CH25 AND I CANT. this plot is flimsy and the FL is just being abused mentally/physically REPEATEDLY, BY LITERALLY EVERYONE.. everyone reminds her she’s a bastard, EVEN HER DAD. and once ML learns she’s super smart ml is like “damn i wish i brought her in sooner” TF IS UR PROB BRO YOUVE BEEN FUCKIN W HER SINCE DAY ONE.. and yk maybe it’s the translation n the mid writing but their chemistry is SHIT. ML pressures FL into pretty much every interaction, and doesn’t really care about FLs feelings
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she’s quite literally ENDING THE WORLD because she’s horny. bc her is sooo OTHERWORLDY DEMONS ARE DEADASS INVADING THE HUMAN REALM?! im all for smut but aside from it, the plot is BAD! WHAT THE FUCK IS GOD DOIN?? shes ALMOST DIED MULTIPLE TIMES AND YET IS DTF HER LITERAL ABUSER(S)! THE EMPRESS DID ALL THAT FOR WHAT?? BROO if i helped a friend MOVE OUT to get away from an dogshit partner only for them to IMMEDIATELY TAKE THEIR ‘EX’ BACK—I’D BE PISSED. don’t waste my fucking time bc you wanna get dicked down!
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- ML is seemingly a scorned lover? or maybe he had a hella crush on the FLs past life but didn’t confess?
- ML acts like a petulant child, v moody when he doesn’t get attention.. and pretty much hates every other human besides FL but can’t/won’t tell her anything about their past
- FL.. so far seems to be a doormat. i get that she was raised to be kind n shit but ma’am you didn’t try to combat ur sister? SHE TRIED TO FUCKIN STAB YOU WHEN YALL WERE TEENS AND YOU WANTED TO KEEP A RELATIONSHIP W HER?? no fucking wonder your sister killed you n took your fiancé. she was escalating and no one DID anything until it was too late.
- i hope the FL grows a backbone throughout the story
- rape, IM SO FUCKIN TIRED OF GUIDEVERSES HAVIN RAPE LIKE THIS.. guiding should ALWAYS be a CONSCIOUS effort by the guide and not just “haha idc what you say/want bc your intestinal fluids help me not go crazy.” it doesn’t make sense for guiding NOT to be something a guide can turn on/off just like an esper.
- stockholm syndrome.. bro literally gets a second chance at life only to try “save” his rapist esper.
- eyeball licking.. okay let’s talk about eyeball licking. on one hand yes there are mucosal membranes covering the eye which would aid in guiding.. HOWEVER continually? every time y’all fuck? that is a sure fire way to get an eye infection because THE EYE HAS ITS OWN FUCKIN IMMUNE SYSTEM and puttin a nasty ass tongue (from a microbe filled mouth) ONTO YOUR VISUAL ORGANS ISNT GOOD. so smut like this is how eyeball freaks get off lol.
ok lets review..
- reencounter
- incense roofies n alcohol
- power gap (uke CAN’T say no w/o bein executed)
- seme got hella ego n enjoys seeing uke squirm
I like the art, I like the translation (makes me feel like i’m reading shakespeare or some shit), but bro- it’s the seme seeing the uke writhe in fear and he’s LOVING IT. i get that he’s supposed to be a tiger but tigers don’t let their prey writhe in pain- they fucking kill them as soon as possible. he’s more like a domestic cat than some tiger.
fuckin RAPE TO LOVE?? AGAIN?! CMON MAN
hella short chaps.. what could be two chapters is now SEVEN… and it’s just actual plot rn, no smut
interestingly(?) a lot of her mannerisms are highkey signs of *autism* lol.. anyway- i love the FL/ML dynamic, bc on one hand shes incredibly naive but on the other she’s an ancient being disconnected from what it means to be human.. and the ML is a v nurturing n protective guy.
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also WOW- im so used to half-baked slow burns that barely progress actual plot wise but this author GOTSHITDONE.. it’s fucked she’s cheering for her teacher to get BEAT by her KNIGHT husband.. n then is never addressed again except as a snide lil call back.. also,
her MURDEROUS, PSYCHO, MOM-KILLIN sister has more fuckin plot armor than our FL and it’s crazy the power she has n her ability to find n exploit slimy people. yes her parents are included in that, theyre dismissive of the FL for literally no reason, taking some random kids words over ur BIOLOGICAL CHILD despite her OWNING A WHOLE ASS (sketchy yet) SUCCESSFUL BUSINESS!!
unrelated, i’ve experienced attentionwh*res like that sister and cutting them off is CATHARTIC AF.
SHE SENT A CHILD TO PRISON?! SHE PUT- THE ONLY POC ML IN CHAINS AND SENT HIM TO PRISON?! IDC IF HES AN ARSONIST HES A CHILD!! Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
ik it’s like- “historically accurate” but everyone is rooting for TEEN pregnancy, which like fucks with your STILL GROWING body. why couldn’t it be a college or some shit these are high schoolers
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y’all i couldn’t even finish the first chapter.. immediate ick. it’s SA ._. AND it’s not even good smut.. once i saw the SEME shove the ukes whole ass PINKIE in his (seme’s) URETHRA AT LIKE 2PM IN THE WOODS i noped out. it’s by no means the worst thing that’s escaped MRM but it’s trash lol.
ok- so im in school for animal behavior/husbandry and i cannot explain the level of pain the dragon food gives me.. what the fuck is that? where does that food come from?? magic? what are those portions?? why is it just thrown tf together?? that’s how diseases spread?? how does the ecosystem work? there are other non dragon animals right?
also the duke is.. kinda.. abusive? like he’s super cold, cut her neck (bc ptsd) then talked down to fl about it, and in general acts like a TOTAL asshat and got JEALOUS IN THE SAME SITUATION W BLONDIE AFTER SHE TOLD HIM SHE WASNT INTERESTED IN ROMANCE.. like this shit is so complicated for no reason. Σ( ￣□￣||)
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yeah- fuck the CP.. HELLA misogynistic and fatphobic kingdom. FL is CURSED and could be fuckin TRIED AS A WITCH bc of it?? and her curse is fuckin gluttony? and it’s only once a month? (is this me on my period?) make the curse DO something.. have her taste/smell be better, give her a scary monster mouth, have her eat swords or somethin. she’s just a bigger lady.. also why tf is a school having a child run a business SOLO?
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lastly- imma say it- i hate the art. it’s stiff, unnatural and inconsistent. It def could be AI, i’d have to re read it tho- it could also be a an artist w a *style*
god is dumb af lmao- i hate that the FL *has* to do it for world peace n not because she wants to.. obvs she’ll “come around to sex” and end up enjoying it.. SHE ALSO ROOFIED THE MLs THE FIRST TIME AROUND- :/ god is a POS, who mismanaged their power and now entrusts FIXING GODS PROBS on a mortal woman. typical.
This is SO western coded (bad way), ofc rich yt folks are hunting a species to extinction in a silly isekai romantasy.. on another note- how the fuck did they manage to bring elephants (african or asian?) to the brink of extinction?? humans here have been poaching elephants for CENTURIES and they’re still around (hella illegal to hunt for ivory now) and these bozos managed to heart wipe them out w swords, spears, and MAYBE crossbows if the author is forward thinking.. how small was the population to begin with?? tf are y’all doin? ALSO- CLEARLY THESE FUCKERS ARENT IN AFRICA NOR ASIA (where elephants are) so wtf is goin on? author threw in some random tidbit about the ivory trade just to show how much the FL changed? fr? y’all included imminent EXTINCTION of a keystone species as a minor plot point?? her ass BETTER be out in the field SHIELDING fucking elephants.
I feel bad for the uke’s ass, he’s gonna need a donut cushion n some tylenol.
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god the FL is just going to be bullied, brutalized, etc repeatedly only for the prince to save her.. REPEATEDLY. so fuckin tired of it. obv she’s nobility but as of rn she’s “just” commoner whose EASY PICKINGS for the entire palace. like- she talked about saving money to leave that inn but as soon as the prince shows up she just forgets about that? bitch sign a contract! get that MONEY while healing him and once he’s healed, achieve your FREEDOM.