it might have been because of the pacing since i usually enjoy something more slow-burn, but idk this felt kind of fake deep...? like very surface level..? oh, well. as long as theyre happy. still, i totally feel like this couldve been like ao haru ride or kimi no todoke in terms of the level of feels but so much substance(?) was taken out that i feel like the moments were lowkey forced and rushed..? idk. feel free to disagree :) the story is nice nonetheless. maybe the mangaka didnt want to stretch this one out too much.
Yeaah I think you just like slow burn lol. I’ve seen both the stories you mentioned and they were such slow burns that I was suffering lmaooo. In my opinion I don’t think it was that rushed or forced. There’s a lot of manga/shoujo manga out there where the author originally intended from the start that their story would be short. Sometimes it’s nice to have short stories like this.
Stretching out a story can make it have the opposite effect and can make the story tiring. For example: some authors like to drag the story out as much as possible, going so far to create tons of problems and drama continuously so it doesn’t end. In those cases lots of people can complain and say that they can’t even see where the story is going anymore. A lot of modern romance manhua including rich cold MLs usually make their story to be 100+ chapters, filled with never ending drama and issues. Somehow I feel as if the authors think by doing that it’ll make it more interesting?
Oh found the manhuas I was talking about:
Invalid Engagement: Ex-wife's Remarriage
A contract of feelingless ceo (something like that)
ok valid valid
i dont care abt her intentions bc the sister was straight up garbo :/ i feel like the only reasons that she ever “fell in love” with HER SISTERS BOYFRIEND were because it was, like everyone is saying, something she couldn’t have for once and because she was unfamiliar with him and declared that feeling of unfamiliarity as love... like ik it might sound like im gaslighting her or whatever but like she should’ve known the boundaries she should’ve never crossed.
idgaf about that confess and move on bullshit. a lot of the time that harms others and guess what: harming others for your own benefit obviously shows that you are morally flawed. overall, i hate that confess and move on ideology. i feel like it does more damage than what is necessary. its flawed and a little dramatic and possibly immature. like, imagine this: girl gets a new step brother and apparently falls in love with him. should she tell him? obviously, no. it would only create chaos if the whole family finds out and a weird tension if it were kept between the two. when it comes to things like this, people really need to take time to think about it. really sit on it before drawing any conclusions. immediately declaring love and considering confession is reckless.
she needs to get her facts straight. it is possible to overcome feelings independently without involving people or causing unnecessary strife for others (believe me). not everything needs to drawn out. alas , this is a story of fiction and i shouldn’t take it too seriously. doesn’t change the fact that the sister is still horrible（╹◡╹）<3
dear lord that was long lmao
Yeah for real I didn't confess plenty of times and you no what, I moved on and am glad I didn't end up dating any of those mfs lol
right...
can they please... just PLEASE TALK FOR. ONCE. and if hyesung tries to run away (bc thats just how he is) can dojin try and catch him WITHOUT fucking his brains out??? i just want some development for their relationship it cant be helped that hyesung was literally r4p3d though..
lol. meant to unlike
Dude can you just enjoy it, your not even buying this bl. What right do u have to complain
Just don’t read the story
y’all... this is a comment section... expect comments... its not like this is hate...
i admit it was little abrasive.
Fucking lmfao @ these ppl tryna gatekeep the comments. This is a comment section what fo you expect to see here? Math problems?
LOL
interesting... cant get it out of my head that the bottom (goto) looks like hirotaka (wotakoi)... maybe this is narumi at work lol
awhh already? kinda wanted it to be more of a slow-burn... maybe there’ll be a little twist... ill have to find out (ﾟ∀ﾟ)
yahoo another yaoi thats rated 9.0+ despite the relationship being the bare minimum or even below it... i guess my standards for porn are to high since we cant even get the bare minimum. i only get disapponted. (dont tell me the “separate fiction and reality” bs) whats wrong with wanting something thats engaging AND reasonable without being too wholesome? idk bro but i think its pretty easy to make a sexy ლ(´ڡ`ლ) seme without making them a literal rapist..? LOL
(also if i see “then just dont read”...) spoiler alert: no one actually listens to warnings (hello ik most of are not 18+ LOL) and we’re also dummy curious so these types of reviews are going to pop up regardless. just know replying with that is only wasting your time :) b
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Then, it's your own problem. Don't go pouring "i hate rape," bs bcs u didn't even care to read the warning. The yaoi is solely about porn and the difference is whether the story got a rape storyline or not. Also, if you u said that most of u are not 18+ then it's definitely a problem. These yaois need mature reader lololol if u discover these rape storyline and said bs this, bs this u probably aren't a mature reader. So what if the reviews are high? Not tht you can stop people hating these kind of story. U read chapter 1 and discovered rape? Gtfo.
You also stated that if people replied to you only a waste of time. It's like denying ppl's opinion which was the opposite of yours. You need a good porn? Watch hanime or fanfic duh. Even if you're saying this kind of rape troupe is bs, people wouldn't care. Because there's million of people which would still buy this kind of story. And this author's work has been published, no? It means there's a market, there's readers who still enjoy these kind of story.
Tips: would be better if you read the synopsis, the reviews and the warning page instead of ranting about bs after you're done. You're welcome.
well there are wholesome mangas you just gotta search for it
no no i dont want the fluffy stuff. i still want it to be sexy as hell just without da rapey stuff lmao and i have found a lot but the rapey stuff is just more common :/
mmmmmmm okay. i never said i was one of those under 18, but just remember that age doesnt define how mature a person is (me clarifying that was kind of irrelevant to what you replied with but whatever). i guess that this is just really a me problem, since there’s always going to be a market like you said, but im just rant regardless. and i suppose it sounded like i was shutting people up by saying it was a waste of time to say “just dont read”, but that was bc replies are doing exactly what we both dont want; shutting people up. this is my opinion lol and its gonna be there regardless and i just don’t appreciate people trying to shut it down.
i dont recall saying that the rape shit needs to stop (since i really do anything abt that bc yk market), but i just want more stories without it. also, you can say it was dumb of me to read this regardless of the warning since i do agree :)
There's tag for that. And you can search it easily too. You also can read the review. Sexy hell stuff? Without rape? There's bunch.
I never said exactly age defines maturity. It's not abt life maturity. It is abt the readers maturity. Rape is everywhere. The temple, church, literally everywhere. That's why I said this story need mature readers. The one can define a fictional character and a real person.
Well, if u said that you're dumb bcs u read this story regardless the warning then i shouldn't possibly further this matter anymore.
hopefully you dont stumble across these rape stories and complain
i have some recommendations ✪ ω ✪
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/tsubanakasu_haru/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/seikaku_warui_uke_ga_guzuguzuni_nakasareru_hon/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/encirclement_love/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/okurete_kita_haru_wa/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/shinigami_wa_korosenai/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/an_ideal_relationship/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/3_pun_instant_no_chinmoku/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/chiya_s_just_an_unstable_guy/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/soshite_boku_wa_koi_wo_shiru/
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/itonaga_kun_no_koi_no_ito/