Clancey, my man, Great plot, great great, the idea is awesome. one problem, there is no flow to the story, everything is too fast or just doesnt make sense.
and heres some real art critique that is actually helpful unlike what these arseholes said. try learning and working in anatomy and having steady lines. also try thiner lines, and try making it all flow. ive notice that anatomy is not quite there and there are many squiggle like lines in the art. and thiner lines might help appeal to the audience.
if you dont mind can u tell me what equipment u use? and if youd like id love to help you improve in both art and story telling.
i really think you have the potential!
was my cup of tea until author pulled a controlling yandere boyfriend and tsundere idiot card. i hate controlling people, i hate it i hate it i hate it.
you can disagree with me all you want. the plot is lacking, characters arent well written. it seems the author just thought of the idea and decided to draw and post it at the very minute.
seeya bitches imma read something worth my time
both of them are equally bad, but first of all blonde dude needs help for those anger issues of his. talk to a therapist man. but also black hair dude is pretty fucked up for isolating blonde dude, but i get it because i would ruin someones life for being a complete and utter asshole. and would do anything, even do worse, to make their life hell as well :V










lol bet thats a relative
actually still think that is our smol bean biological mom o-o
never very pog is it is