It lacked fine tuning, and could have polished some plot points.
I can’t give specific moments since it’s been a hot minute since I read from the beginning, but it just gave the feeling of lost potential in the story. The characters though, I really enjoyed!
So I hope we get more from the author in terms of new stories with fun characters.
While this story with their little girl cute, I really really hope their son is actually Leticia’s brother.
I know it’s a stretch since his soul was offered up, but I just really wish all the people who suffered to find happiness, including him.
Exactly! He was such a cute smol pookie child when he was killed! He deserves a second chance!
Right, everyone got justice except for him! Poor baby brother's soul gone before everyone could even meet him :(
When he said I love you to her, his face held no affection. What a slimey bastard, was he trying to use any lingering affection she once had to sway her to him?
We all know the real reasons his ass wants her.
Yeah, because his ego can't take it! Her not being head over heels for him, that is.
Wasn’t there an issue with spirit users where the more they use that power, the shorter their life span gets?
Or since the art chanted, the plot does too?
That's still a thing! It's why the Archmage keeps doing "checkups" on her!
Yeah i couldve sworn that was the case but what i remember is Elena doesnt know that but the head of the tower + Elena's mentor both know and thinks she didnt awaken that ability yet so they just dont talk about it
It’s kinda dumb she keeps it from her, seeing as the spirits are just all “:) use our power pretty please”
So she can’t stop and go, oh they’re sucking my life force out better stop.
I agree, like if that were me, I would've excitedly shown my stronger abilities to the mentor which would've made him be like "ohh no no no". Because bruh she already showed off her potions to help others and did the whole viewing crystal thing which now people know about, I imagine she would've been excited or uncertain at least about the limits of her spirit powers to reveal it to her mentor who would know a thing or two about it
The prince and fake deserve each other. They’re both obsessed with their end goals to care about who gets hurt in the process.
ML was going down that path, but got lucky with our queen.
Do they even need kids? They got two right there who can each inherit both titles, rendering the need for them to have heirs useless.
And before someone goes, ‘but they’re not of Elsa’s blood so it wouldn’t work!’ It’s a made up story and they could make it so since she married into their family, she could adopt one of them into hers or something.
You right about the inherit of both titles, both the kid is ML brother kids right? So both of them (the ml and the mc) haven't had a kid.
If they have kid later I think it's more good if the kid is a girl, girl that resemble MC so maybe we got the "both the kid protective and loved their little sister dearly because when they see her she reminds them of MC" Kinda things
But I'm happy with whatever the results tho, them having kids or not, or the kid a girl or a boy, and I kinda understand you
I’m just saying it cuz the emperor wants a child between them to then use said child as a political tool for his benefit. A girl would be super cute, but that’s like the epitome of, ‘she’ll marry into the royal family so we get the special powers of the dukes family!’ Type nonsense.
Omg ur so right. Tbh tho im pretty sure IF they have a child, it’d be towards the end when everything is chill— plus I don’t even think that Elsa knows what reproduction is atm & rolf doesn’t look like the type who would force ts on her either ! So hopefully the emperor doesn’t get what he wants fr
She can wear the dress ueueue
I’m pretty sure he suggested this as a way to injure her escort, see her healing powers in action, and then win to ask for her hand in marriage.
It just seems way too convenient that he chooses to participate when the Duke is missing in action, especially when the winner gets a wish from the emperor.
First thing I thought was also that this bastard will ask to marry her if he wins… but the princess has her wish too so she could counter his wish by asking the king to refuse his wish as her birthday wish ! She was clever to ask for that for her birthday. She can still UNO reverse this moron.
Well we were spot on XD now need to wait another week to see if my second guess will happen and she will use her wish to refuse his proposal.
I'm a little late (〜￣△￣)〜 but!! I'm also really hoping she'll use her wish to refuse or make sure that she gets to marry our ML (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
I thought after he said he was gonna become emperor, that he would say, “and you my empress.” Like a FOOL.
Same
SAME
This is the best comment I read today! (≧∀≦)
youre not alone...
I think while the mom thought that was tragic, Margaret losing her life. Seeing this chapter now makes me think that she really helped mag so her son wouldn’t off himself out of guilt.
Since he was thinking about how if he didn’t heal the one he killed, it didn’t matter. To then finding her and actually healing her and making it to this point where he knows it’s Margaret, we coming full circle. And I’m super sad that this is probably gonna end soon….
Why are they going this route, so Leoni just can’t have any friends who aren’t royal?
I thought she would have filled her in like, oh this is a fake engagement so I don’t have to marry the emperor. But instead they make her friend a crazed obsessed fan of the prince…. Just to add drama that doesn’t need to be here.
She did tell the friend, apperently, but black magic, wooo... yeh I don't really get it. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Yeah I saw in the update that she covered her bases, but this chick is still acting like a nut.
Like she was already crazy before leonis sister stepped into the picture for her, so it’s super annoying that she can’t have a single friend.