So basically the moral of this story is whoever fuck with me I'm just literally going to fuck them this is so stupid not only is this man raping innocent people he's destroying innocent people's lives he's becoming worse than the niggas that did that to him he's becoming worse than the chairman and he thinks he's God because he has some type of power man I tell you this now if someone just shot him he would not think like that at all this is just disgusting and whoever is giving this 5 star y'all need therapy y'all need to go see someone even if it's just a story this is just man this is just unpleasant.
Not only is this thing a rape story, and this girl is just OK being raped by a dude sShe doesn't know, I can't barely read whats happening with all the amount of flowers my eyes are being covered with nothing but flowers, flowers, flowers, flowers I'm tired, bro I really am tired, I can't, the author needs to be analyzed someone, send a message to the author because just no
Reason why I love the story is simply how these 2 see love how she saw the love, even through all the hardship and trials, she still stuck to loving that person even during all of that, but he, on the other hand, didn't like his situation, a man has a financial clock, and if that financial clock is not going anywhere, he's starts to get frustrated, and this is exactly what happened to him not that I agree with the way he did it, but he should have tried to figure things out with his partner instead of going to a new young thing.
I like these type of stories but what I don't like and this is just my opinion I don't like all the romance it really isn't needed to fill in the story we could have gotten so many other things you know I could have gotten background from other characters like his previous team mates that would have been better but the constant forcing of romance is weird because also he's an old man in a young boys body did we forget that suddenly the old man sees a 15 year old girl is like OK I can definitely hit that but bro come on now if he was with like Lena his previous team mate I would be like sure but with a child on my weird.
Not only does, this story promote rape, the male lead has literal boobs, bigger than the female lead, they don't know how to draw the story is trash, and I'm even thinking, like, is this even worth the read no, it's not, so I skipped it, and I came straight to the comment section just to leave this because I only read chapter one, and that was more than enough for me to drop it immediately.
So for context, I love the story, I love where it's going and everything that's going on, but why, for the love of God, does the female lead look like she's 12 to 14 years old and the male lead looks like he's 20, if the author could just give her a little bit more definition, her head looks like it's about to pop because it looks like a balloon, but this is just a little bit too much, give her better features make her look like she's her age.











So I don't know what's happening with stories anymore and I feel like rape and manipulation is becoming a common thing but authors are just using it in stories and not really going for the more realistic approach, so I'm just wondering what's going on......to be honest I read the first two chapters and I was like let me just go to the comment section because I have a feeling how this is gonna go and it's gonna be what I expected I wouldn't have minded if like his possessiveness he you know started opening up to the other dude but no no no he went the other route and that just made me feel even more uncomfortable for anyone who wants to read this go ahead, it's not that bad when it comes to certain things, but the rest no, so enjoy while you can because, I'm just dropping it I'm gonna go back to the cheesy romance stories, you know, because I'd rather have that than this.
sigh i meant to like smh.
It's okay