
The concept was cute, even tho didn’t like the whole knew each other since mc was a child thing, and then the childhood “friend” was so nonsensical it’s like the author was tryna write a grey character but it’s not grey it’s black and white? IDK HOW ELSE TO DESCRIBE HIM, his actions don’t blend together into a believable human personality, he one moment acts like he was worried about mc in childhood how he had walls but then he locked him in a classroom just cause???, in high school he was in the same circle for a while but then acts like he oh so cared about mc being hit with depression and distancing himself, like ohhh it hurt him to see mc go through that but then he’s punching mc, his actions just don’t blend togetherrrrr, and whys he now once again acting like he has nothing but mc’s best interest at heart, whys he jumping against jini like “do you know what he went through cause of you cause you were gone”? Bitch you don’t get to act like this when you were the one to torment him way before jini showed up…
And then the concept of the story was cute but then ch18 gave whiplash cause how did you suddenly kiss and start dating, jini had all those valid concerns about what if mc only thinks he likes him cause he’s all he has and knows and once he sees the real world he’ll let go of him etc, but then mc says I like you and suddenly the problem is changed as if jini only said no cause he thought mc didn’t like him? I literally thought the beach chapter was a special before I checked it was canon chapter…
then the ending was so entirely unnecessary and toxic, the psycho was unnecessary, the psycho being Jinis ex was unnecessary, the kidnapping and sa and poisoning was unnecessary like what’s all that for if you’re not at least gonna show the villain punished?, and genie was set free but he’s still likely an immortal spirit so the mortal X immortal problem still wasn’t solved… like it focused on all the wrong things ToT the simplified plot is abandonment issues, losing him once and feeling hopeless, losing him again and having hope, that’s it

Bro okay the couple are freaking adorable, the ml is the greenest everrrr, but the bottom made me go insane bro where's your survival instinct and brain, why would you think you can deal with this crap and not ask for help or even inform this multimillionaire guy that definitely has connections, bro he's an actor he knows a thing or two ABOIT stalkers and self protection and bodyguards and shit, why would you think you can do anything on your own
Also I hate cheap plotlines like the psycho and on screen SA, bro their relationship dynamic is adorable as hell, just write some everyday possible normal people conflicts to be the plot, why an obsessed psycho and on screen SA bruh BRUH

Okay I loooove how adorable they are, I’m dying at ml cringing and the prickly shit he said to mc before realizing it him, I love how even tho ml is the one with a years long crush mc is the one having dirty thoughts and going fshhhhhh all the time, I love how their sex scenes didnt jump into penetration but touching each other a bunch of times before that and how bottom was the one touching top first and getting comfy with the dick lol, and my god I’m insane for tops like this, with such dedicated selfless love
And then ok I’m still sad doyoon ye is gone at a;l and probably won’t come back to live better days, I still don’t like how in stories like these the wronged and abused and depressed original body owner is just gone and doesn’t get to live happy days but at least I’m glad the couple are seeking justice for him and not treating it as “he has nothing to do with us so his problems have nothing to do with us”
But also I pull my hair out when in these situations after an argument one leaves the house, like bro just stay in another room till y’all calm down, leaving would only make him worry and panic

I think this is a better ending for ogDoyoon. He suffered so much that I might sound kinda pessimistic but it's better to give him eternal rest instead coz sometimes living isnt all great if you have no love one to stay for. I also think if it weren't for Gyeol mc would have jump first opportunity to go to afterlife since he doesn't have an anchor in the living world.

Ok I wanted it to be more like they’re both on their knees for her but they’re acting more like she’s an object and they’re having a competition over who can have her, the fuck you mean without my permission, why would she need your permission, and then bro tryna force a second dick in and them two bickering while she’s in pain wasn’t it, ew

With every update I wanna pull my hair out every time I see comments still siding with neoul
Bro end WHAT “ambiguous” relationship, there was no ambiguity, none at all, he had repeatedly rejected you, you having one sided feelings wasn’t ambiguity, the terms of the relationship were very clear, you were friends and nothing more, and he himself out loud just admitted how much of an ass he is, WTF do you mean wanted to be compensated for my feelings it was a pity letting go without having sex once,
I’m BEGGING y’all to at least imagine this behavior if it was a GUY not taking the no from a GIRL repeatedly turning him down and wanting to just be friends and then him making her drunk on purpose to get sex as a parting gift for himself, there’s no way you’d be siding with the guy would you?there’s no fucking way you’re gonna say “oh but she has a loud obnoxious personality so it’s deserved and fine” right? RIGHT? Pls say sike
I can’t imagine seeing this behavior and thinking “oh poor neoul I want him to go be happy with luna” i seriously can’t get y’all, there’s only so far you can sympathize with the pain of unreciprocated love but he’s not some innocent little uwu brokenhearted baby he’s a vile human being how the hell are you feeling pity for him, he wasn’t wronged by yeoreum at all, but he’s purposely tryna be cruel to him now, how do you see this shit and not want them ending together not because yeoreum deserves a better friend or lover than someone that does this shit to him after he’s been a fantastic best friend to them for 2 decades but because “NEiUl DEsErvEs LunA he’s bEttEr”? Not even counting the fact that neoul is being shit to luna too, how do you look at someone that’s pursuing a monogamous relationship wih a new person but still having sex with his first love and thinking “oh he’s an innocent baby that deserves better” be so fr rn, he’s a Carrie
But also I was feeling bad for luna being dragged in this mess but seems like he’s probably not any less messy of a person cause how do you hear your new connection had sex more than once with their love of 20 years even after meeting you and you don’t say fuck this shit I’m out?and now that he saw his car and connected the dots that it happened again and your thought is “this is getting interesting”? Ye no babes, I’m begging y’all to read what the comic is telling us, he’s not the angel we thought he was, no normal person has this reaction to this info, normal people run for the hills if their new connection they’re meeting with the intent to become a couple is having sex with others, they don’t stay to work things out, they don’t cling to the guy cause “the guy is good I don’t wanna lose him” they don’t cling to the guy to win him against the first love like it’s a competition, they don’t stay to get revenge after feeling wronged, they don’t stay for the drama or whatever with a “this is getting interesting”, I’m calling it he’s twisted too

So ye in that sense maybe neoul and luna do fit together, two twisted weirdos, go be together and let yeoreum be with someone that isn’t vile like neoul, fuck, yeoreum deserves better than this crap
Y’all are just too used to siding with the bottom and being against someone with a loud personality it’s like you’re not even reading the comic at all ToT

Everything this. I sincerely hope the author is rage baiting and they don't think Neoul is truly a sympathetic character. I stand by Neoul is trash and Yeoreum deserves better. Yeoreum is pitying him??? WTF. Who bangs that many times and professes love out of pity?????? Neoul r*ped Yeoreum, and Yeoreum is too much of a himbo to realize it.

I was only ever on “they’re both bad” side at the very beginning when It wasn’t all revealed yet and I thought yeureum played around with neoul and left things ambiguous with him and gave him hope somehow only to not commit, or if he was the kind of friend that always prioritized something or someone else over neoul cause that was the only way neoul s behavior would make at least a tiny bit of sense as plot writing
but then the reality of their friendship was revealed that he clearly rejected him and gave no room for ambiguity and as a friend was a great friend then neoul is the only one in the wrong, Idk about others but I didn’t go back and forth ans don’t know how others reading the same thing aren’t also entirely only mad at neoul too

I feel like the author doesn’t even know what they’re tryna portray cause In words Theyre tryna act like yeoreum is somehow bad with all that crap last chapter from his friends saying “neoul carried the friendship” when we’re shown it’s clearly not the case, yeoreum was the one running after him even prioritizing him when neoul was throwing jealous tantrums about yepreum having other friends, and they’re tryna act like we should be siding with neoul as this pitiful bottom with a broken heart that was wronged and yeoreum has to earn his place back into his heart or smth but that plot does NOT work when you see that neoul is the one who did wrong and yeoreum didn’t wrong him, not feeling romantic attractiopn to him before and feeling it now is NOT a wrongdoing
Top earning his place back into the bottoms heart plot doesn’t work when the bottom himself admits he’s only rejecting him now to make him feel the pain he felt when he was in one sided love, that’s the only reason he’s not taking him now which only reinforces that neoul is a bad person so if author is tryna make us side with him they’re doing a shit job

honestly you're spitting facts - but i do love the toxicity, i love toxic yaoi LOL
I want to see where this goes bc it started off as pure comedy and was honestly so fucking funny but now its angsty asf !!!!! and i do love to see the seme suffer (I like pathetic man) but at the same time i feel so bad for him, my shayla!!!!!!! uke is a bitch tho- ANYHOW fuck luna i dont like him he's ugly

Yeoreum needs to quit him and Neoul needs to realize what an asshole he's being and that his life has only ever been happy because of Yeoreum, and then he needs to GROVEL. Will the author do that? Unlikely. It will probably be Yeoreum realizing the Luna is epic level trash, maybe even cheating on Neoul because he's bored if he wins, and Yeoreum trying to save Neoul only for Neoul to continue being hateful until he realizes it for himself and then Yeoreum comforts him because he's sad, and Neoul never takes responsibility for his actions.
Awwwww they were high school sweetheartssss