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This story is the epitome of “you’ve got a little plot stuck in your smut”. This story wouldn’t have been this long if they didn’t have sex every other chapter. S1 was intolerable. Just when they got some plot in, these horny mfs had to have sex. S2 cooled off a bit cuz they had that huge conflict that separated them, so it was unavoidable that they couldn’t have sex, but the moment they got back together, it was sex all over again. This story isn’t even that long to begin with, just 40 chapters total with some side stories in between. Could’ve easily halved it if they weren’t fcking all day every day.

I was actually interested in the plot and its progression. The whole misunderstanding and hurt, I was digging it, but it kept getting interrupted by sex. They’d get a little plot dialogue in then immediately these guys will have sex.. This story has more smut than romance, they should’ve added the smut tag and removed the romance tag.

When they actually focused on the plot I quite enjoyed it. The top was a douche and I enjoyed his begging. I wish he suffered longer. The bottom is a die hard fan through and through, no surprise he forgave so easily. He’s just another blind fan after all. Their relationship developed nicely imo. Bottom was into top but at the same time, still had his doubts, as both a fan and just a ordinary lover. Top wasn’t into bottom and kept pretending, but along the way he grew affection. There’s layers to it, I can see the effort in building the characters. But after the conflict, I feel like it just got solved too easily. From what felt like a multi layer effort just turned into basic characters.

I would have liked to read more about the cousin idol and the former idol member. Their relationship seemed to have had a hiccup and even seemingly broke up. But they got it resolved along the way in the background of this story. Im especially interested cuz they’re so polar opposites. Cousin idol is so expressionless and deadpan while former idol is all sparkles and smiles. Such a odd but good combo so what’s their story, ya know? Got me nosy.

Overall, it’s a decent read.

A cocky and confident Yajima harbors dislike for Torikai, a cool and talented fellow trainee in the ...