it got too irking to continue, and i normally. like the read all the way. rape plot following the cliche "ohh i'm so weak! i need my alphas! how did i fall for them this hard!" title misleading where the fuck is the feistiness. dialogue was terrible and personalities was half baked. bum like many others like this.
from "aww" to "what??" to "why" to "oh" to "that's fucking stupid" to "aww" again
reread this after continuously rereading the side couples every few months holy cow i forgot how bum the main couple is
but the old man and beta and his ex w the other beta are my goats
stalkerxstalker
enablerxfreak
trying to make the other fold before realizing their own feelings
ykwim??
i want to see their kids. ugh communication actually happening w them? joy and whimsy? yo i need more.
is it just me or is he just keep getting bigger by every chapter
haven't read good shit in a while, in the middle the chins started pissing me off, but then it lwky got fixed or i was better at ignoring it. i thought it'd be completely disturbing based on the comments (idk it didn't irk me) but it's great storytelling. the real victim is victor i feel terrible for him but its great i like this.
















