
character development: 3/10 - was rush, cant see any changes much
art style: 8/10 - extra points for shading, fading tiger marks, both has long hair with baby hairs everywhere
story flow: 2/10 - confusing asl, some parts are awkward and rush (hate it when there's drunk confession)
body anatomy: 5/10 - slightly stiff but the veins <3
sex scene: 5/10 - not salty, not spicy, just right.
story plot: 3/10 - not a fan of brother as enemy and protecting the humans from his own brother story; plus the issue taken lightly (mother killed for fun?!), i hate the fact they just let that pass.
setting: 5/10 - forest and house; simple, fitting for short story fr.
overall, rating is 3.6/10

kotani is every japanese man, i swear- they are cold but they express their love by showing u effort as in planning the perfect date for his lover.

indeed! Kotani is type of person who rarely expressing his love through words but action. it shows when kotani was taking care of shishikura when he was sick, he was stand up for shishikura at the mixer party, doing the aftercare to shishikura, and many more!! ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
its okay!! i know it is important to have a heart to heart conversation with your partner for a moment but still people expressing their love differently on a daily basis so it doesnt mean they dont love you (▰˘◡˘▰)

im all for diff kinds of love but as someone who is asian from asia its stupid to continue the act that kotani is doing when it is clearly upsetting his lover, like its ok if your partner is ok with that love language…however shishikura is clearly not! i wont say anything about the progress as to not spoil tho lol

dialogues: 4/10 - awkward yandere moment
setting: 5/10 - the couch fall was uncalled for then son dragging his dad (like a corpse) to bed was funny asl
plot: 4/10 - incest.. come on☠
character development: 5/10 - is there even? T T
art style: 8/10 - cute shading and shadowing (esp the cover)
flow of story: 2/10 - the white pages in between says it all
body anatomy: 2/10 - stiff and looks broken bones
sex scene: 3/10 - not fapable enough
overall: 3.1/10 rating
lmao if cheolho gon have green hair, this straight up mha dekubaku modernize, adult ver