Ah no you don't...keep your filthy hands away from her...
You mongrel
I feel proud...i new it will be great...
It's like watching it grow
Ok...so listen...
In here author don't know what to do with the story..
So he's adding new story and suspense out of nowhere that have no meaning...
As in he kind of fell for her when he saw her through the glass that can only be seen from his side ..she was making poses thinking it's a mirror...
But now he's like...WHO ARE YOU..what's so special about that i felt so attracted...that you can ruin my plans so easily...
Broooo you kidnapped her and gave her job...you...it's all you
Wait...it's actually freaking good...like seriously it's fun
Ofcourse its kinda dog shit at almost everything but ...
It's just so fun i read it in one go without dropping even single time.
This is first work of this creator that I actually liked...while others are quite similar to this one...
It's special..
Ofcourse it have many many things that will feel like complete nonsence but
Trust me it's fun..i liked it
Okay ..i think it's fun to start at least...
FL is actually kinda fun and great character ofcourse you gave that cringey rape imprisonment shit .. without any convincing story to back that all up...if it's rape and confinement...there has to be a very compelling story .
But it don't have .. things just happened
I want something messed up .. completely messed up
But...it's just bad... nothing more...just bad
Wh..what..the..what was that thrust...
Like a final blow of death
But why was the first' chapter so....bad..
I dropped it before two times after reading a little of 1st chapter...but it's great right from the very beginning of 2nd chapter