While she was being neglected in the first few chapters how'd she use the bathroom? "Hey that's gross, there's magic okay? Suspend your disbelief" - No. That's not an excuse for poor writing. Author, do better
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While she was being neglected in the first few chapters how'd she use the bathroom? "Hey that's gross, there's magic okay? Suspend your disbelief" - No. That's not an excuse for poor writing. Author, do better