so i guess i'm in the minority that doesn't think this is that good. don't get me wrong, it wasn't awful, i gave it 3/5, but it didn't impress me at all.
this story had so much potential; great idea for the plot and good character's profiles but the execution lacks A LOT. it only scratches the surface of literary issues it tries to talk about, it is too short, too rushed, too shallow. like, this is not revolutionary, this is not something new, it never was, even in 2019, i'm sorry
maybe for somebody who hasn't read a lot stories like this it is going to be a 5/5 read and i'd say i'm happy for yall! for me personally this was just another forgettable read.











i knew this sir mugo bitch was actually the evil one, hope he chokes on one of those cookies
No for real. I liked him best at the beginning but I started sensing his weird vibes so fast. He’s the most docile one but tries to paint the other 2 in the most senile and dark perspectives. And also the face he made, like what was THAT?? Here he was trying to save him and now he’s making a face like “why haven’t u left”. And he also likes to constantly rile up Lord mugo. I NEED TO KNOW what’s the backstory ASAP. But I still wanna see sir mugo in action with ma boy
personally i didn't like him from the start and smelled his bullshit right away BUT STILL when he thanosed the gummies into thin air just like that why jaw dropped that was enough of a confirmation for me that he is the villain here.
i honestly think that the sudden change in his attitude is not so a change but more of him just taking the mask off. i think he's always been like this and just pretended to be lovely towards the mc, he must have some ulterior motives and just like you said i can't wait to know more!! gimme the backstory!!! gimme lore!!! i love this title but it annoys me that the chapters are so short and sometimes give us NOTHING
by the way i've liked dubious mugo the best from the start so i'm happy it looks like he's going to be the endgame here! he might have been a little rough but i believe he is a good person and will not let the mc be hurt by anyone. it breaks my heart to see him suffer so much and the mc being so oblivious to anything that's happening around him