
I thought it was a interesting premise but it is trying to be more than what it is. Everything has become tell don't show. Character are been oversaturated with multiple plot lines and change opinions easily.
Like mc wants out but sometimes he is okay then he is weird then he wants to stay back wanting to leave. Then mc is like I hate you but I love you but I hate you.
The only redemption character is the mom why bc she dead

I feel like the story is all over the place and some chapters are in the wrong order. Like we get expose earlier about hyungs crush but chapters later we continue with why crazy boy is crazy as an adult but we never see why he is like that ad a child.
As well mc resolution and resolve are not quite clear. He sometimes care for him but sometimes he is an ass. Example the water bottle he did not take it yet next scene he is a doormat having sex again. What happened?!

100% black hair is spiteful for some reason and forces mc from the past to marry him so white hair can't have him. But not only that we see they have a hidden relationship so possibly black hair cursed mc so he can't be with anyone.
So here comes my wild hypothetical theory.
The reason why mc need to be with white hair 24/7 is that he possessed the future version of black hair so they can finally be together and by doing so he counters the curse in a way but once apart black hair wants body back and forces not only him but as well affects current curse making up both suffer.
Like black hair is using the same curse to make it impossible for them to be together

This the type of story that intrigues you but dose give you eye candy's.
There is actual plot and not just sex. Like some stories use sext to move the plot forwards and don't give you story (I'm not complaining).
There stories that I understand why there is sex to move it forward but sometimes just bc why not every chapter is tiring.
Example I'm reading a story where the ml can't sleep because his hyper sensitive sense of smell and mc with There natural smell helps ml to sleep but accidentally end up in weird positions where bot just go with the flow but that dose not remove from the story it actually adds because of the strange and unic situation.
Did they walk for the car or he brought the car? If he brought the car he knows how to drive? But he did not put the breaks? HOW DID THE CAR ENDED THERE BECAUSE THERE NOT IN A MANSION BUT ON A STREET? AND HOW DID HE FIND THE CAR?