
Let me put in my two cents.
Imagine you're affiliate with a gang for 10 years, those years of bonding, special moments, hardships, connections, you memorized their family, their hobbies and their loyalty, which is honorable itself because guys will respect and stay loyal and obey every bid of your command because they trusted you, you guys all grew up together, all die within vain, all incinerated within a year because some punk skinny tall 6'2 with gorgeous blonde hair and blue eyes got your dick wet and because you let him in your team, you WANTED him in your team, you let your dick made a decision for you. Some fucking stupid shit, am I right? Why are u willing to let some blonde twink, some nobody prick, come in disrupt the organization of your gang. How is it not hard to GET it through ur THICK SKULL, u dick hungry, stupid work for brains that 10 years of together CANNOT be replaced to some insignificant situationship u manage to float it for a year. It's so fucking dumb.

What?! This idiot guy has the ability to clone himself, he could've done so much with cloning ability like your clone could be working in different jobs and get multiple income or make them build your house, or make them run a factory a business that's in your name and instead he cloned himself so he could have sex to a girl?? Actual shit for brains. Stupid mf

This is not bad but I think the author completely gloss and forgotten about what happened to the top's being bullied. Like I feel like all the people who did him wrong should be held accountable, since the guy he liked also just watched him, instead of trying to sleep with him, maybe make him held accountable. Bystander effect is also why this assholes keep doing this shit. No one is stopping them. Why not? Was the bottom a coward or if he did stepped up, what would the guys do to him? Clearly, he wasn't that respected enough

I'm not mad LOL I thought Im criticizing the author's weak writing game. As for the seme and uke, I think they're both in the wrong. Seme was in the wrong for trying to sleep with his bully, he should've made uke held accountable. And Uke was in the wrong for being bystander back then and instead of trying to be held accountable, he agrees sleeping with him thinking the problem will go away on its own.
I fucking love this author and A GREAT FUCKING ARTTTTTTTTTT