I was really looking forward in reading this again after all this time and when I saw it already ended I rushed to read till the end... Guess what I was really and honestly disappointed!...
Its really good from the start, the character build-up, the art, etc. But suddenly the story becomes confusing. Like somehow the author tried to put mystery in the plot, but failed to make it interesting and like they jump-packed all the details in a mess up way. In which its very confusing (also TLs is a bit off at some point). Didn't even introduced the some new charcaters like they just poof out of nowhere, some are also introduced but didn't seem so important that they were left behind.
In the end, like I said it became lame like IS THAT IT? After all the preparations, the rushed plot, the stoic confession (would have been my favorite but its always left hanging and in the end for me I didn't look interesting anymore), the lame tossing of jewels that vanished the demon god forever, and they live happily ever after, The End wow Good grief! The author must be dancing for joy after all this time it finally ended (so badly
As he said it needs a stromg will to erase the memories but pania doesn't want that.... And for real just Bembang already
That's it girl!! You got this fight for your freedom!!! ... You are the writer of your own story so this time be Happy with him
If the comments before me are all right (coz it really is true obviously), then we got a long story ahead of us. Consider the first chapt as the foreshadowing wew.... It kinda bored me now coz the plot is pretty much obvious, the FL is kinda lame and slow-wit,. The ML being overly protective seems to happened so fast and I prefer if he acts more cunning or act accordingly not abruptly.. I think it doesn't suit his appearance when he acts without thinking in some scenes, like misunderstanding the FL with the other guys? I mean shouldn't you investigate first? idk whatever I think I'm gonna shut my brain next time I read the updates
For my POV that is soooo redflagy from the start... Yeah ethan is so damn handsome and I've never seen a character like him (the appearance I mean its so unique ), but thats not it even the tyrant cardan didn't even let eri die (he always save her even without the contract)... See the difference between those two guys! Even after knowing why he tried to kill erina thats still a no-no and if I were eri I won't ever let him get close to me rather I'll send him faraway .. But since its the plot armor we need him stuck close to our FL.... Idk I pity him but he deserve it.. He is not innocent, rather lowkey possesive.
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Gahhh! Anyways I already caught up to the latest and I already missed eri amd cardan's bickering
She needs to stay alive and hide that long so she can see sion again goshhh... How can she survive with that b*llsheet trashing around uhhg
I think its just 2 or 3 years
Surely they will put flashback as the story progress, so we just need to wait and honestly this is one of my fav art so far.. Its so gorgeous and cute.. The facial expressions are not so stiff or stoic as well I've noticed it improves when they jump to adulthood thats quite awsome.. Anyways marinating it more for later
Read up until chp14
Its always unjust for 2ML-3ML etc... Both really like the FL but both won't deserve her... The efforts are all in vain just for the sake of the story progression... But guess what? We can't do anything about it... So I'll just hope that they find their respected love ones
Seriously this is hilarious for her part but tragic on his part bruh I don't even know why I'm here