I changed my rating from 5 to a 3. The plot and art is really good, but the pacing is all over the place. When Kyuntae (?) and Shiru fought, it felt really rushed. With the transfer student, the pacing felt really slow.
And now Shiru is confronting that girl and now everyone knows her gender? What just happened? Are some panels missing? And the way Shiru changed her personality with the girl all of a sudden was just a sudden personality switch and as a reader I wasn't very invested in it. Does this author have an editor or anyone to check this?
Also, when Shiru was confronting the girl, the background characters just dissappeared. Any one else feel this way?
Is it just me or the new chapter feels rushed? For some reason he just got angry and Shiru had that type of attitude. I do understand if the author had less pages to work on, but the editor should also be aware of how emotionally involved the readers should be. I'm just saying I didn't feel very indulged in this chapter.










ON MY WAY TO KIDNAPP THOMAS AND MAKE HIM MY CHILD