
THIS is how you should write the strong female lead, just show she's the lady who's in charge doing her things and no questions asked.
the minor detail isn't important anyway.
i hate it when author bombarded us with so much info like just list shit load of stuff about how the female lead is strong and important by the FL point of view. stupid

it is always feel so ridiculous to me when the technology they have is wheel and boat but their medical field is so advance beyond that, they have the data for brain dead when i bet they haven't got any scanner tool for anything yet let alone brain.
remember! people bury their loved ones with bell that the ropes attached to the bell goes inside the grave, that is the technology they use incase people thair burried is still alive.
and that eye "surgery" too, just use magic in this background. it's more believable.
kids I got to tell you, there's fine like between being vulnerable and being a wussy bitch. and this one is a little bit closer to the latest
art is so fine tho 9/10
You words speak to me on a personal level, especially with this story