Honestly I was willing to put up with the story until they also started raping the sis in law and the dude at work decided to blackmail the girl ALREADY BEING BLACKMAILED like alr author we need to put on the breaks and slow tf down son. This feels like some ugly bastard hentai but they made the guys handsome (still doesn't make the content any more palatable).
Ending felt so rushed, and I hate that seme's responses to the friend's lies were just "that's not true/they were lying" followed by "I'll prove it to you with my body" like not just lazy writing but a huge cliche to try and cover it up on top of that. Also hate that it skipped their first time together that's always the most awkward and the most intimate, I would have forgiven it if they did it just to get straight to a more aggressive smut scene but we didn't even get that! I also hate that the love song was clearly inspired by the shitty friend's lie, they could have made it romantic by being like "he was lying when he said I wrote love songs for my lovers, but I decided to make this my first one for you" or something like that, but nah no mention of it at all they just want us to forget that ever happened. Just overall a really frustrating read for the second half of the manhua.











To the people saying drink more water, some people in the piss kink scene like a more dehydrated piss because of the color, taste, and odor. Some people like more diluted, and what you eat/drink can also change these things.
Here's also your regular PSA that this is porn and you should do your research before attempting this. Anal gaping is usually recommended when pissing in the ass because if you don't have an air pocket the pressure build up can tear the tip of your urethra when you pull out. Also make sure you clear yourself out with an enema and that your colon isn't inflamed or sensitive (the ammonia can cause burning and immediate bowel voiding in sensitive individuals).
and for those of yall who have vaginas, be careful bc pee might mess with thr natural pH levels, which leaves you susceptible to more infections and irritation
Yes very true! I know people still do it but they just accept that as part of the potential risks.