Yet another smut Im reading for the plot lol they keep getting better it feels like
Excellent grammar, punctuation on point, the story is... Creative, makes you think and question the authority, fills you with righteous rage to go against the norms and be different, cured my cancer, saved the polar bears and most importantly made my flacid dick go rock hard after imagining Kevin doing the same shit to me.
Thank you. See you in the......
I hate when the FL starts all decisive like "I'm gonna do this and that, scheme left and right, play with anyone's feeling as long as I reach my goal" and makes me cheer for her, then two chapters in turns into a complete wuss. No scheming (I say no cause they would be ruined even if FL didn't do anything, cause they are just that dumb that person ......
100 people did / 104 want to do
Creativity 10/10, execution 0/10, total 5/10
I've gone from solid to gas and now I'm hovering above the clouds waiting for the cringe to pass
