Storytelling isn’t that good ://
Maybe don't read it then?
It would be cool if you could explain why instead of commenting empty and mindless comments like this
Well only thing I didn’t like is the fact that storytelling isn’t good? I hoped it would be a bit better since the story and art is very good but storytelling is kinda messed up, when something is close to being perfect and there is one bad thing about them you can’t help but want that thing to be perfect too:)
Who are you to decide what ppl comment tho?:D I can just write “he is hot” should I explain why for that too? Don’t be ridiculous
No because tastes are subjective, I can't tell you what's hot or not, but since your statement can be based on arguments I would like to know why it's bad storytelling.
You could maybe tell us they're a problem with pacing? Or dialogue?
And I believe when someone drop a comment, that means he's open to discussion so yes explanation plz you obviously commented this for everyone to see and not for decoration so I making this productive by asking you why
Something being mindless and empty is also subjective
Well more than pacing, the way they explain the story is kinda scattered for me I guess, keeping up with it is kinda tiring. Something so simple is explained for so long but we can’t really see how FL reaches conclusions? They are always flashbacks when the actual thing happens. I am not sure if I can explain it right tho, my english is not that good
Now now we are getting somewhere! this is why I said it was empty, you could have said that from the beginning
I see what you mean I think so too the flash of informations are really long and with also those past moment are kinda overbearing but i feel like in a lot of good story with a heavy setting in the background it's always hard for the artist to represent at the start everything but the more we will get into the story they will be less information drop.
(it's kinda the same with the other serie the artist made '' a step mother's marchen''.)
with chapter 2 where is the first chapter?
Yes wondering this as well. Cannot find the chapter 1 anywhere
the first chapter is called "regret of the sea" idk if it's on mangago but it essentially shows the guy's confession he talked about in chapter 2 and also the white (?) haired guy discovering that his childhood friend isn't homophobic and he was manipulated to reject the confession. So, as the title says, he regrets everything, realizes he still has feelings and apologizes to the guy he rejected. We then see the kiss between the two (that is also in ch.2) but he gets rejected and goes to the beach to cry (the sea part of the title)
(very shortened)
Sorry if my story telling created any confusion lol
oh btw the white haired guy is a victim but not that much, as soon as he saw them kissing he started asking private and personal questions (do men take it up the ass? are you the top or the bottom? when you confessed did you want me to put it in your ass?) and stuff like that
Ok I can see that she is mentally unstable and not thinking straight, all she thinks is what hey did to her. But instead of destroying the empire she can make it a better place for everyone especially with knowledge she possesses this is bs and I am getting sick of it:/ like girl you’ll destroy the empire then what?? Just be a decent ruler and fix what you criticize anyways she looks so empty I don’t think she cares about anything else beside herself tho:p
For real
I believe Charlize isn’t trying to ruin the country. It seems like she’s just trying to get revenge on the emperor and people who played a part in turning her into a sword and causing her to suffer for hundreds of years. In the story, she’s trying to get Dylan to take over the empire so when she leaves the empire would still be there and being ruled by a capable leader. Plus in a previous comment, one of the answers says that in the novel, when Dylan takes over he doesn’t kill any innocent people. So in the end, the only people who would be dying are the king and people who support him/helped him turn Charlize into a sword or are just bad people. In the previous timeline, Dylan was revered and thought of as a genius when it was discovered that he was actually the person ruling from the shadows, so he had obviously done things that helped and benefited the empire and its people. So I mean, she’s leaving the empire in capable hands once she leaves and is just killing off the people who hurt her in her previous life.
Spoiler warning
She talked about destroying the empire and she manipulates him to hate the empire tho, you are saying in the end Dylan doesn’t kill innocent ppl (thank you for the spoiler btw) but it is not about Charlize it is something Dylan chose and I don’t think she cares about others’ well being even Dylan’s he is a tool for her what I criticize is her morals and her logic not what happened
He tries his best for his daughter that’s kinda sad
Hold on daughter? I thought they having a son
They're talking about the professor with the stalker daughter
no the teacher’s daughter yk crazy pink hair
jakdksödnns they are so cute I’m melting