everyone going on about the guard meanwhile I'm like.. "oh warden honey yeeeess!!" maybe I'm just old. dunno. but omgosh I love the plot! this story is so interesting and incredibly beautiful. kudos ( ˘ ³˘)
your translations are fine! I understood what was happening! someone's negative opinion and r0de behaviour shouldn't stop you from doing this! they're just haters.
I'm just happy Dad's trying!