I think you did a good job, its easy to read the notes and then you dont have to do all that extra cleaning and fixing. The dialog was well translated too. Thank you!! ヾ(☆▽☆)
Seme kun felt so horrible and sorry and really reflected on forcing himself on uke kun, and what he had forced was a hug and a kiss. you're a good man Seme kun, a really good man (・ω・)つ⊂(・ω・)
Thank you for this happiness!
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