While this chapter was good and it’s steadily building on the story, it didn’t really feel like a season finale. It kinda felt like there should’ve been 3 or so more chapters to get something more climactic.
This story builds up so much and then the ending just happens. Like there’s so much story going then THE END.
What I want is for Dan to take control of his life and JK to take control of his emotions. I want them to talk it out, work on their issues and move forward. Not in 2 chapters but hopefully throughout the rest of this season.
Health issues asides, I think authors go on long hiatus’s because they don’t know how to move the story forward. For this story specifically there are too many contradictory things happening at once and I don’t think they really know how they want to end the story. It’s kind of like they’re just writing everything and lowkey letting sm influence how they take the story because let’s be honest, this most recent development? Insane lmao
This started off really promising then it just kind of went off the rails. It started to drag a little in the 20s, then picked up and then it just changed genres? I’m still confused about what is actually happening and how we got to the end.
I didn’t like the brother before and now I really don’t. How are you acting like Zeo did something to cause your brother to runaway when it was your doing the entire time. This is why I can’t get behind “oh he just wants to protect his brother” because honestly I don’t think that’s his motivation. I would give it 15% at most and this conversation they just had proves it. I bet when the next chapter drops he’s going to be all high and mighty and Zeo is going to say something like “your brother is alone because of you how is that any different from what happened to you” or something like that.
Ikr. Like, Rawon wouldn't be in this situation if it weren't for Jiwon. It feels so unfair for Rawon to not only have to clean up his bro's mess, bail him out of jail, and then now give up his love life as well.
Omg I forgot about the jail bit!! Yes exactly!
That’s what I like to see. Tell him to kiss your ass!!
Update end of chapter 44:
Nevermind.
We're going to get some more volumes. Not them introducing family issues with the ukes family!!
The way he picked up the couch and it said “put me down you psycho” made me laugh out loud omg that was hilarious.
This story has equal parts drama, comedy, mystery and romance. Enjoying the ride so far.