
As an archer I just had to stop by and point out the inaccuracy. You never ever aim with one eye closed!! Anyway, that bothered me so I just had to point it out haha

Yeah, normally if you aren't a "serious" archer meaning if you're not planning on hunting then it's okay to close one eye. However, by doing that you narrow your field so when you're out there like the MC hunting and shooting arrows in a battlefield then you never close one eye because you can miss the changes in the situation or your surroundings which is fatal. One mistake and your dead or you lose your prey.

Okay, I don't mind that this is rape because this is fiction and some people do enjoy this genre (no judgement), though it's not for me. The only reason I'm still reading this is because I hope I get to see the seme suffer!!!!! There are some stories that you just can't dislike the seme even if he is a rapist and sometimes I sympathise with them and hope for a happy ending together, but god damn this guy is just sooo f**king hateful I just want to see him burn!! Gaaah, I hope the uke can beat his disgusting ass and find another man/woman to end up with because this guy doesn't deserve him! Even if he was/is homophobic he was a decent guy who deserves better.
Why did I always picture Shanon as an old man?.... he looks kind of hot actually ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Actually i thought he's younger than that ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ