Okay, so the plot is plotting, the world building is building, the characters are charactering. So far so good, right. I really like this. My only issue is.....why is sehyung so weak??? He's always getting rescued by some other stronger person and that terrifies me. Because what if, IF, he is ever in a scenario where he is alone in a genuine dangerous situation, how will he protect himself? I'm not asking him to be some op character but does he even have any fighting skills? Magic skills? Whatever skills his race has to protect himself? Matter of fact, it's been 30 chapters I havent seen him use his wings to fly, can he even fly with them things??? Are they just for show?
When he was ganged up at the banquet by those fcking losers I genuinely felt he wouldnt be able to do a damn thing IF they acted and the other two weren't there to help him. It is terrifying I have to feel this way for him. I just want him to be able to protect himself ya know.
Story shows he's brave and not afraid to step forward but imo that means shit when it really comes down to physicals. Hope he gets stronger?? Idk I'll keep reading.
I haven't actually read the novel but I've read the raw
Sorry to say if you wish the MC to fly but one of MC's wings was forcefully ripped off by his stepbro/cousin (?)
As we know the wings are part of a sensitive area for celestials so imagine the feeling getting ur pleasure area getting ripped off from ur skin
Yeah the story explained for some reason he cant fly even with both wings available so I've pretty much given up and assume his wings are just for show.
Because it's not like he was actively trying to get his wings to work ya know, IF he was doing that constantly but failed, then I can see why getting it ripped later would be a big deal. But....mans never even attempted or seem to care that he has wings and can't fly so. Oh well. Disappointed but accepted ( ̄∇ ̄")
OKUMURA, SIR, YOU DONT GO PEELING PEOPLE’S BANANA THEN LEAVE THEM HANGING, ESPECIALLY NOT SOMEONE AS INNOCENT AND CUTE AS TAKAMINE IT’S A CRIME TO DO SUCH A THING!! I WAS READY TO FIGHT YOU FR. CAN’t BELIEVE HE MADE TAKAMINE, THE INEXPERIENCED, CHASE HIM LIKE BRUH YOU DESERVE JAIL FOR THAT STUNT
MY HEART LITERALLY BROKE FOR TAKAMINE WHEN HE WAS LIKE, SO WE KISSED MEANS WE'RE LOVERS NOW? THEN WAS PROMTLY REJECTED. HAD TO LOOK AWAY FOR A MOMENT TO COLLECT MY PIECES CUZ WHY TF YOU GO AND HURT HIM FOR. STRAIGHT TO JAIL!
Had to search up Play Party cuz I was nervous for a moment there it's gonna be a chaos kind of situation where people just do whatever. But thank goodness, there are rules. I have a feeling if they do go, Hwayoung is gonna put on a good show and hopefully, that's gonna be the last time anyone bothers them for a piece of Gyuwon.
Yea no I totally get that… but upon looking again the translation is a bit wonky but i think it actually may have been that gyuwon could see everyone outside but the people outside couldn’t actually see them but only hear them cuz sungjoon was like “this is more difficult than when i listened to them on the phone” and the people were like swarming the mirror i think to see what’s on the other side but they couldn’t and at they end everyone looked frustrated
lmaooo maybe the reason I'm so hard on jh is because bro did the bare minimum. I dont consider him "redeemed" yet
Here's my original opinion when s2 ended on ch65. https://www.mangago.zone/home/mangatopic/16154566/
I dont think jh has done anything to make me see him as a good person. Sounds like he just likes that his dick works with garam. It's gonna take you more than that to get garam to trust you. The ex is one issue, you are another. Cant bank on fixing the ex problem then think you're off the hook.
Uhm? Are we reading the same shit? Or you blind something? Yes its a bare minimum but usually stories like this get toxic and toxic, while this seme is different he did everything to reddem himself its not about if this is bare minimum or not. its about trying to change, having a character development and this maybe bare minimum for you however if you have read lots of toxic bl manhwa you can say that this story took a turn in a good way, bcs lots of foxic tops if the uke say no what did they do? Locked them up and raped them? Or make this mentally and physically depend on them, or abuse them, or the worst kill their family of friends so that the uke would have no one to lean on, so if you keep yapping that this is bare minimum then you’re not garam so shut the fuck and just enjoy the story, this kind of story is hard to find bcs of the toxic community of bl manhwa where raped and abuse is normalized
Lol BL readers’ standard in summary “does it have a dick and does it have a pulse while it’s fucking a hole with another dick attached to it. But ewww if it’s a trans woman because woman are nasty.” Mind you this isn’t targeted at your response specifically, this the general comment of many readers on this site.
Mind you this is a comedy love story but it truly is the bare minimum as the OP said. The mental gymnastics to say someone who purposely verbally and emotionally harassed, physically assaulted and even at one point raped his apparent “love of his life” all due to a dislike of their sexual orientation and it be hand waved away because this bully was nice when said roommate needed a ride to see his mother with cancer is literally the minimum of human decency. Or buy a laptop you broke. Or stalk him when he attempts to study and further worsen his mental fortitude by demanding sex and preened attention.
But for this to be seen at the grandest gesture there ever was and to erase all the truly horrible things jaehyuk has said or done on the road to “love” is a level of cognitive dissonance I am to aspire to. It’s actually disgusting to even say this is a redemption when if an actual gay man experienced this and not for the simple fact that this story is ENTERTAINMENT for women no one with reading comprehension would say this is acceptable let alone how a queer man should be treated and then internationalize his deserved anger for the sake of alleviating his tormentor of guilt and better access to his body.
Gram is written to be illogical in his acceptance of any of this, especially when the author decides to add even a back story that we will see mirrors Gram’s literal source of trauma. Somehow Jaehyuk is the better option simply because the author said so? The fuck is that logic, make your character either be entirely dumb or don’t make a backstory that makes your own ML just as much a villain in their own delusional narrative.
I’m simply turning off my brain at this point because if I actually took apart most BL there would be very virtually nothing to read that is well written and well thought out that doesn’t rely on cliches, tropes, and writing devices that any creative writing professor would mark wouldn’t mark with red marks everywhere “ what is this crap”.
Cant silence bad writing ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ Bro went from zero to 1 and people go wild just because he isnt a serial killer. The bar sure is low lmao.
Maybe the 5 month break from s2 to s3 made everyone have memory loss about the shit jh did. Who knows. But the hype, the "best character development" has got to be delusion. Bro didnt even do nothing worthy. The fact he wasnt even paid back for all the shit he did too, is already mind boggling enough cuz you're right, he didn't even suffer that much
Everyone has ex's, what's the big deal bruh ( ̄Д  ̄) creating problems from nothing smh.
And it always be the loose mf that got problems with their partner having ex's like bruh didn't you also use your dick on someone else before you met garam?? Didnt you try to use it while angry with garam except it failed because BL logic yhats why you crawled back?? Like stfu and focus on yourself (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
Ya but that's the past tho and he already in a relationship with garam. Why is bro going crazy about some ex when HE is the current boyfriend. That's a recipe for disaster.
Exactly why the narration forshadow their honeymoon didn't last long. Now we know why, it's cuz someone wanna be nosy about none of his business( ̄へ ̄)
They're not in their honeymoon yet. Jaehuyk is the only one who confessed so far. Not only Garam is still distant but he literally has difficulties with affection signs and words. That was bothering Jaehuyk before knowing about his ex. He was fine when he thought Garam has had tons of exes. Knowing now that he actually had only one it made a difference.
Jaehuyk connected the dots with that new information and Garam's behavior with him and came to the conclusion that Garam is still not over is ex and he probably was the only guy he ever loved. Otherwise why he's still uncomfortable with Jaehuyk's affection? It's not crazy to think that. Garam is indeed still under the influence of his former relationship. He has trust issues. Still I feel like he could be a little more affectionne. He's so cold with Jaehuyk he annoys me a lot lately ://
Hold that thought. Jh is the only one who confessed? Are we pretending ch66 "do I have to say it for you to understand me..?!" "i..also..like.." didn't happen? They became official in that instance, no? So their move together is technically, timeline wise, their honeymoon phase of the relationship, although as you mentioned, garam is not as receptive.
Anyway, regardless. All I'm saying is jh was once also the red flag that caused garam to dislike his kind. Of course garam is not gonna trust an ex-homophobe. And doesn't matter what his intentions are, him overreacting over the ex would be him digging his own grave.
I think it's more about Jaehuyk being a fuckboy rather than homophobic. He fears he would just keep fooling around since he's so popular. That plus his own trust issues from the former high-school relationship. The raws are reaching the point where most of the miscommunication is gonna clear up so we'll see what happens next :)))









Okay so I guess Sehyung really cant fly with them wings, otherwise he wouldn't be complaining to his vessel about it. Sigh. And here I thought a defense mechanism is flight and quick escape but even that is out the window ( ̄△ ̄) I just want to be assured he wont be in danger when alone, pls author-nim give him some power.
I wouldn't be so damn worried if this wasnt a yaoi. Now not only do I gotta worry about him being beat up, I also gotta worry about him being raped. Sigh.
HE NEED TO POWER UP SO HE CAN PROTECT HIS HOLE