I'm having an epiphany. Even after all these guys went through, they're still stuck at the "insecure, no trust" stage in a relationship. It feels like they try to fix so much but constantly it's just back to square one. After they resolve a misunderstanding, you'd think it's good. But then the same issue just comes up again. They just take turns having insecurities. There's no trust between these guys, zero.
I'm reading this story and I'm at a loss of words how two characters can love each other so much but constantly have to reassure each other about their love (in a way that implies they have to reassure or else the relationship ends). It's so weird. Isn't it supposed to get to a point where you just know by heart and don't have to feel this way anymore? Even in this recent update Ash has to be told about the proposal, and Lyle has to be assured Ash is his. Doesn't it ever get exhausting being this untrusting of each other?
Makes you wonder about all the misunderstandings they're gonna have after marriage. It's gonna be chaos. I think they already discussed about having no kids but I'm 10000000% sure it's gonna come up again once they're married. Even if we dont get chapters for it, I just know it is canon misunderstanding. Lyle is gonna see a happy couple and feel insecure. Ash is gonna distrust that Lyle still loves him. They're gonna have the same issue again. I just know it.
This story is the epitome of “you’ve got a little plot stuck in your smut”. This story wouldn’t have been this long if they didn’t have sex every other chapter. S1 was intolerable. Just when they got some plot in, these horny mfs had to have sex. S2 cooled off a bit cuz they had that huge conflict that separated them, so it was unavoidable that they couldn’t have sex, but the moment they got back together, it was sex all over again. This story isn’t even that long to begin with, just 40 chapters total with some side stories in between. Could’ve easily halved it if they weren’t fcking all day every day.
I was actually interested in the plot and its progression. The whole misunderstanding and hurt, I was digging it, but it kept getting interrupted by sex. They’d get a little plot dialogue in then immediately these guys will have sex.. This story has more smut than romance, they should’ve added the smut tag and removed the romance tag.
When they actually focused on the plot I quite enjoyed it. The top was a douche and I enjoyed his begging. I wish he suffered longer. The bottom is a die hard fan through and through, no surprise he forgave so easily. He’s just another blind fan after all. Their relationship developed nicely imo. Bottom was into top but at the same time, still had his doubts, as both a fan and just a ordinary lover. Top wasn’t into bottom and kept pretending, but along the way he grew affection. There’s layers to it, I can see the effort in building the characters. But after the conflict, I feel like it just got solved too easily. From what felt like a multi layer effort just turned into basic characters.
I would have liked to read more about the cousin idol and the former idol member. Their relationship seemed to have had a hiccup and even seemingly broke up. But they got it resolved along the way in the background of this story. Im especially interested cuz they’re so polar opposites. Cousin idol is so expressionless and deadpan while former idol is all sparkles and smiles. Such a odd but good combo so what’s their story, ya know? Got me nosy.
Overall, it’s a decent read.
After all this teasing theres gotta be a least one scene of them doing it in dragon form, right? Right?!?!?!
（/TДT)/
Oh my fcking god I love a smart ass motherfucking couple One is smart enough to escape and one is smart enough to figure out about the escape. Done and dusted, they're ready to get married.
Nearly clicked off many times cuz bottom is so cringe you’re embarrassing af ong. Forgetting the rings, then accidentally wearing the bunny suit. I’m embarrassed for you!
The whole misunderstanding is typical. They played each other so I’m not even mad they caused their own problems. Y’all deserved the crap y’all put on yourselves lol
it's not a coinkidink that the guy dressed as a frog has a lily pad birth mark?
can someone summarize what themes/components they liked/disliked about this, without major spoilers? (some is fine). im tryna see if i wanna read this or not.
You don’t need a dad, you need Jesus. You both need Jesus. Seek help
I love the art. The plot? Meh. I mean geez, yall ran a marathon around each other. I'm surprised they're childhood friends because you would think having lived your whole life together it'd be easier to just blurt out "I love you!" And laugh it off, but then be like, "you fr?" And then like, "yeah actually" and then boom dating. The most awkward childhood friends ever. I would have believed them if they said they only knew each other that last year of high school.
The top is pushy and selfish, the bottom is too lenient. The amount of times the bottom was slowly coerced into agreeing to do things is eye rolling. A combo for disaster when no actual verbal communication is established. I dont care if yall both want this in your inner dialogue, say that shit out loud or all this shit is just bullshit.
I saw a ig post of this with a crying baby so I came to find out more. The baby was so adorable. But this a red flag story?
i was js doomscrolling here on mgg and i seen this person's profile (cus this user was defending rape and saying that the bottom liked it ew) and when i clicked it, i was met with a "sorry u do not have access to this page" or whatsoever?? tf does that mean? am i blocked? LMFAO if so, that's fucking weird cus i don't even think me and this ho interacted at all
What is this story even about? I skimmed through and everyone is just fcking everyone?
Dont worry yeowoon, you can go ahead and reject jigu. He will simply reject your rejection with his delusions and think yall are dating. Trust in our delusional king he will find a way, you cannot escape (▰˘◡˘▰)
As a fan of bdsm, I enjoyed the spank and tears. I see no wrongs with how they went about the play. A safe word is usually never established in shit quality bdsm stories. At least they got it right here. And the tone of this play is pretty non-serious, it's hardly even a play.
But I can see how it can be "out of character" to suddenly establish this dynamic when s&m wasn't hinted previously.
Either way, they're both enjoying it so whatever.