i have not read a single chapter so don’t come for me. all i saw were the album pics of the manhwa. why tf does he have a red ass fucking dick but he’s pasty white everywhere else?? the transition from his white ass stomach to his RED dick is so awful too. anyways, is this story any good to pick up?? the cover art looks gorgeous.
the smut wasn’t even worth it. this story became ass the second the second season started. the whole same soul/ multiverse thing felt like a kid making up new rules so that they could win. oh yeah basically people have the same souls and that’s why you can transfer into a different body OH BUT ALSO you can still transfer into another body if you have a similar shade of soul. talking about same souls bs, so maythan was an evil bitch who sold drugs to students and died but jinsoo (who literally has the same soul) is an innocent smol bean who could never do something like that…. okay sure. you can’t just label this a side story and then jumble together some random lore to fix the plot holes in your writing. and before anyone says “oh the creator rushed this cus they were sick blah blah blah” okay? i can still critique a work.
jinsoo had four connections, how do you let FOUR potential relationships be outdone by a side couple yuri—mind you, the yuri got like three seconds of screentime. i’ve said it once and i’ll say it again, the problem with harems is that they don’t spend enough time developing chemistry. genuinely with the confession, i was just like “okay” cus i really didn’t see any genuine scenes where jinsoo fell in love. their relationship was always this awkward secretive back and forth (not even mentioning the rapey bits and pieces) like it was never even fully fleshed out.
you know maybe i’m just expecting too much. you can’t just write a story and make the characters fall in love without actually developing anything. to me, everything felt like friendships with some sexual tension, there was barely any romance developed. i didn’t like the way the story ended and i also didn’t like the way the side stories were written. it was an okay read, nothing special. and before anyone attacks me, i literally stuck to the end because i wanted to see what happened. i can criticize something i don’t like.
ugh it’s gonna be a “i was protecting you all along belt bullying you” trope isn’t it…i hate those so much like why don’t you just communicate you losers
why do i get the feeling the cloaked figure is the future cardin?
no hate to sol but doel is so like no wonder he was the og mc, i LOVEEEEE me a brunette hottie. i’m so tired of the black haired dukes or the blond crown prince. i need me a brunette commoner fine ass like doel i’m so sad he’s just a side character
y’all don’t understand how badly i need ryras i love me a long haired baddie
sorry guys, emile and raretis look like siblings and it’s throwing me off. i get it, not every couple with the same hair are related but they have the same exact shade of black and and the same dark eyes and their bangs are even the same i mean if one of them showed their foreheads i would look past it but they literally look identical. if you gave raretis long hair, he would look like emile. i get the feeling he’s endgame and it feels a little weird lowkey. like they couldn’t make the black hair different shades? or give them different eye colors?
i am grateful for the mass updates but this last chapter 53 was so corny lmao. “you were attacked by wolves…the matching dolls…please believe me…” granted i get it she’s cursed but this gives off “jason, this isn’t you.” vibes LMAOO i mean it’s okay, i liked the beginning chapters but the mc is proving to be quite dense in her adulthood. the mls are all rash and stupid, you’re telling me there’s four of you and not one thought “hmm we shouldn’t conclude that she’s the killer with no evidence” i think the initial premise was promising but he execution fell flat. i’m already 50 chapters in so i’ll see it thru but it’s excruciatingly painful with how dumb the fl and mls are
guys maybe i’m just a scaredy cat but reading this at night made me anxious. the writing is done so well
mmm idk, i feel kinda weird. even after 80+ chapters, is it weird to say i don’t feel a connection to anyone? i didn’t gaf when maythan died, i was just like “well damn” and don’t get me wrong, i love me a harem but there were too many male leads for me to gaf about anyone actually. i didn’t care for their backstories and didn’t care for their romance with jinsoo. and it’s become more evident with the modern side stories. i don’t really gaf that everyone came to this world. but i don’t understand, if carsen is end game, why did they bring everyone back and make all the male leads fall in love with him again? it’s clear he likes carsen so why bring everyone back and stir up this nonsense again? why torment the other male leads with a love that will never be fulfilled? they live two lives and in both lives they’re all rejected, yikes, losers LMAO.
idk, i’ve committed for so long i might as well see the side stories through. i think the beginning was good and the plot was kinda lost along the way. even with ian, i didn’t really care. yeah he was annoying but i didn’t have any emotional connection with any of the other characters to get mad at ian for being a villain. probably would give this a three out of five stars, wouldn’t reread it though. i wonder how the side stories will end tho cus right now, it doesn’t seem very promising. before anyone attacks me, this is just my opinion. if you don’t like it, just dislike it and scroll. i don’t need a bunch of ppl who can’t handle critique to be attacking me.
blondie is so suspicious but i feel like the author is gonna pull a “he’s innocent” card and have him be an underdog who was trying to uncover shit. it’s too obvious to make him the villain with him being so sneaky
usually i hate size differences cus they always make the woman so frail and petite it gives pedophilia but i’ll let it slide this time cus he’s a fucking werewolf and the fmc is written like a realistic woman