Suisalty November 17, 2020 1:39 am

I'm reading it (caught up at ch 3) but I don't understand at all it's so disconnected in my opinion and the dialogue doesn't flow enough for the story to come together... the basic idea is there sure but it lacks substance imo :/

    LaLa November 17, 2020 3:06 am

    The story is meant to be like that...the pieces come together as you read...whether it will turn out to actually be a good story in the end we'll see

    Suisalty November 17, 2020 5:06 am
    The story is meant to be like that...the pieces come together as you read...whether it will turn out to actually be a good story in the end we'll see LaLa

    Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to come together as you read it, it at least gives off that sense and is comprehensive with what's given, but I don't really get that from this one it just feels like poor execution

    Silth November 17, 2020 11:35 pm
    Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to ... Suisalty

    If it's a bad writing it'll depend on how the story develops and on the finale. I'm also pretty confused, but if the author will add what is missing in the next chapters then it's ok

    LaLa November 18, 2020 12:40 am
    Whether it's meant to be like that or not, isn't it bad writing to leave readers so confused though? Of course I could just be more stupid than the average reader, but usually in stories where it's supposed to ... Suisalty

Suisalty June 9, 2020 4:28 am

It's cute but I wish mc would treat Natsuki more like a guy and didn't have this clear disconnect between his perceived version of Natsuki as a guy but not really and him when he isn't cross-dressing, it just makes his feelings seem disingenuous

    Miss Nightingale June 14, 2020 3:22 am

    What does it mean to treat someone like a guy? How does one do that?

    Suisalty June 14, 2020 2:47 pm
    What does it mean to treat someone like a guy? How does one do that? Miss Nightingale

    I guess treating him like a guy is the wrong way to put it, but he treats Natsuki in the stereotypical way one would treat a girl and it's clear that he doesn't fully see Natsuki as a guy, so he treats him differently than he would treat one of his male friends. I don't think that people should be treated differently based on their sex, but that's how the mc is treating Natsuki

    Miss Nightingale June 14, 2020 7:51 pm

    Yes there is a difference in the way the mc treats Natsuki compared to how he would treat other friends but I believe that's because the mc LIKES Natsuki in a romantic way, the mc has a crush on him/her so putting myself in the shoes of someone whose intentions are to get the other person to corre

    Miss Nightingale June 14, 2020 7:52 pm

    To correspond my feelings I would also treat them in a different more caring way, more affectionate too

    Miss Nightingale June 14, 2020 7:58 pm
    To correspond my feelings I would also treat them in a different more caring way, more affectionate too Miss Nightingale

    What I meant to say here was that if I were in the same situation as the main character, I would also show my love for the person I like in that way regardless of their gender, I would treat them with care and affection which is the way some men treat women as if they wanted to show they can take care of them (something like that, English is not my first language xD )

    Suisalty June 14, 2020 8:03 pm
    To correspond my feelings I would also treat them in a different more caring way, more affectionate too Miss Nightingale

    That's fair, I can understand where you're coming from

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