
The art is great. And I see the concept of the story. I just can't stand the Damsel in the distress scenario. That urks my nerves. At least have one of them that can fight back in stead of being a screaming scare whistling flower. I hate it when guys try to put me in the group and I'm like "nah, I got this." 10 years training just not to be put into that troupe. It's annoying 2020, there is no excuse ladies....well, unless you actually have a physical disability. Then ok I'm sorry.

I kinda feel bad for Seth. And maybe this is a weird theory. I don't have much basis for, but I do hope it works out like this. Sekhemt, Seth's older sister that set this up. Is actually remorseful of what happened in the past. Because of what happened between him and Osiris corrupted Seth into whatever inner anger he has. Like he is broken. So she make be an ass outwardly toward him but she truly cares about him and in order to heal Seth she has to break him. Kind of like how doctors have to heal a bone that broke and didn't heal properly. And I think the Sun goddess "rah?"already knew this and is working with Sekhemt. Because in the beginning she called Osiris out.
What do you guys think?

For foreigners who think American are affectionate like this:
It is a false stereotype. Very false please do not do this. You will get punched or have authorities called on you. We actually prefer our personal space, and most of the time we go out of our way to avoid interacting even with each other. We don't know where this rumor came from.
Again please, do not come to the U.S and do this!!

It. It bad, but not good. Like
You look at this and see the potential. What could have been.
But ti turned out so superficial.
Like the typical " I high I've got your pizza"
"Ooooohbut I don't have any money to pay for it what should I dooooooooo"
"Well, I cant u iui nobody one way "
And it's just no imagination and going the safe route.
It could just be I have trading Yaoi and Shounen-AI for LITERALLY 20 years. So maybe it's just like "uh, uh. So what makes you different from the rest? I don't want run of the mill cash grab."

.....the sentences make NO sense.
Like, words are just thrown together. Just when I get sorta invested, there is randomness that makes me go "...........wait.....huh?"
And as much as I want to blame it on the translator. I don't think that part is their fault.
BUT BUUUUUUUT! I will say this to the translator
You have to look up the definition of onomatopoeia
Because 'vigorously' is an adverb.

And I truly do. This hiccup won't stop me.
But do you ever notice that comics and some manga just talk too much and like mostly it's about nothing. U am at 32 and this is the second time this dr and Inforgot pretty demon face's talked pretty much about nothing l. Like 2% merit 98% college BS filler.
I still love this comic it's just a downside I have to accept with it.
I......am......so confused.
The story just backtracked once it realized it forgot the beginning, and it was done clumsily.
The main and first part was GREAT and the flash story was great, but they didn't tie them together well. That middle of the background story could be stronger.