Font was easier to read, thank you. But please capitalize the start of sentences, especially if it's a proper noun like "I" - the i was still hard to read as lowercase. Again, old noona here. Great work with all the Mmm, mph, hmmph, aaaah!
Big daddy's gay panic continues... OMG, I DIED. That's exactly what he's doing but he's doing it adorably. "If it were anybody else they'd be dead!" Bwahha.
(⊙…⊙ ) wut.
he... the building? ... and then... his feet? ouch? (⊙…⊙ )