Sagitter May 29, 2020 7:43 am

Very cute and hot (although cute even when hot), but I couldn’t really get into the relationship? Not really super developed and the way he just kinda accepted how he got a facial by what is essentially a stranger is kind of weird... although what do you expect from a 6 chapter manga that’s basically just sex and a bit of drama. Me still quite likey thoughヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

Sagitter May 26, 2020 7:11 am

His face when he saw that he hit someone was priceless.

Sagitter May 25, 2020 9:43 am

This is quite long. Don’t press the plus unless you want to be greeted bu a whole ton of text. Once again, don’t press it unless you want to read some random thoughts.

Before I start, I just want to say that these are all just thoughts and opinions from what I’ve read so far. Feel free to disagree, other people’s opinions are always interesting. Also, I forgot many names. I’m just like that.

As been stated by many, but cannot be stated enough, #15 is precious and although he can likely do it himself, should be protected.
Bruce is an asshole. Enough said, moving on.
Mr. Guard is an asshole. But he’s also trying to keep his job. So idk if I should hate him. I probably should.
It’s been established that mc is likely either normal height, or pretty short, but either way, #15 must be huge if the size of his demon is the same size as his physical human body.
White/silver haired guy is a mom.
Speaking of him, he is totally going to end up with the guard dude, it’s easy enough to see. The tropes are all there waiting to be used. Wondering how it will fit in the grand scheme of things... or maybe it won’t and will just be a side story.
Something in me wishes for pure fluff where mc and #15 leave the prison thingy and live life together quietly with mc’s mother and just live wholesomely. That wouldn’t make much of a story though... but a 4koma side story would be cool. Not going to happen though. Probably. (I could dream.)

Nitpicking ahead. Beware. It’s all probably explained but I glossed over it while reading, lmao.
So why do the prisoners have their hands on a key? Isn’t it kind of dangerous? And wasn’t it stated that the key that could mold into the heart lock thingy kinda precious or something? Or at the very least, mc should’ve felt some pain as was established in the beginning.
Speaking of the beginning of the story, did they literally just start using the locker room or something? Why does it take so long for the others to find out about his heart lock?
I might have glossed over this in the beginning but why does mc let Bitch (Bruce) go into the heart lock or whatever if he knows about the fantasies in there. Was it his way to confess or something? Not very smooth though, as I’m sure that people don’t like to be confessed to via the perverted fantasies of the confessor. I’m not siding with Bruce here, he’s still an ass, and his reaction was way over the top, to understate it greatly, but mc should’ve maybe thought about it a little more. Then again, teenage hormones. Enough said.

A couple of questions
Where do heart locks come from? Were people just born with them? If so, how can you upgrade it? And how did prehistoric people open them? And what’s the difference between A-E? Is it quality? Or is it like blood types?
What even are demons? Is it like a physical manifestation of a person’s bad thoughts? And what are the requirements to have one? Do you need to do something extremely bad? Or have an extreme level of negative emotions? What are they made out of? It’s been shown that they can physically manipulate things and are stronger than regular people. Also, idk if this really happens or if this is my sleep deprivation saying hello, but can’t they shoot like, little bullets of themselves out or something? How does that work? Do they get those parts back or are they regenerative?

Thanks for reading this excessively long comment that has a bunch of random thoughts, goes way too far into what is likely a simple story, and asks questions likely answered in the story.

And finally, if you are still here (which will be nobody) ... raws?

Sagitter May 24, 2020 8:38 pm

There's something about this story that prevents me from liking this story as much as I should, which is strange because I'm usually a huuuuge sucker for this kind of shoujo/josei reincarnated as a villainess story. Idk if it's the art, or characters, or just the story itself, but if someone could help me put my finger on it, that would be great.

    Oyaaaa! May 24, 2020 9:30 pm

    It's repetitive. We get the same boring dialogue from the mom, Citation
    Lets do lost of fun things, Ain. Lets have breakfast always together like this Ain. Ain Ain Ahin Ahin..... Citation end.

    Yiss May 24, 2020 10:03 pm

    She repeats "i am her mother, i want to be a mother here, he is so cute, i will take care of him" too often, yep. Saying it and not doing anything to ptove makes her look naive and almost like a second character (no personality).

    I also had high expectations cause i like these kind of stories but not all of them are the stuff i am looking for... pity ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Eiriku May 25, 2020 9:08 am

    Yeah it's the FL dialogue. They are pretty lacking and it in result makes the story kinda iffy. Don't get me wrong I still love the story and it's plot, it's just her dialogue dragging it down.
    Still can't wait for next update though ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

    Oyaaaa! May 25, 2020 9:53 am

    Honestly I was so fired up for this on the first 5-6 chapters, but then they just overdid it with the same bland dialogues. Dunno, I am still having high hopes for this though :D

    Yiss May 25, 2020 12:48 pm

    Yep, I agree with all of you. Still I will give it a try though, hoping that it changes at some point. I would love to see what happens if she discovers how her child is behaving, but I think the author will make both father and kid change first, so it'll take time ... ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    Eiriku May 26, 2020 8:14 am
    Yep, I agree with all of you. Still I will give it a try though, hoping that it changes at some point. I would love to see what happens if she discovers how her child is behaving, but I think the author will ma... Yiss

    Ooooo I can't wait for when it happens!

    Yiss May 26, 2020 3:30 pm
    Ooooo I can't wait for when it happens! Eiriku

    ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

Sagitter May 16, 2020 7:58 pm

The official English releases come from Web Novel (adding a space in case the word will be censored).

Sagitter March 29, 2020 5:37 am

Tbh, everyone’s pretty fucked up, maybe with the exception of the mom.
I hate this story so much but I also love it, help me ( ;∀;)

Sagitter March 24, 2020 5:32 pm

But Ra laughing all the time when pretty much everyone else was on some scale of horrified or angry gave me life.
And baby Anubis is cute.

Sagitter March 21, 2020 1:47 pm

The magical healing cock.

Sagitter March 17, 2020 6:06 am

Solomon is really cute. Whenever s/he’s in the panel, I’m always staring at her/him.
Red Cloak guy’s dick is really small. He also has nice legs.

    solar March 17, 2020 6:53 am

    omg well your not wrong about any of them I guess

Sagitter February 15, 2020 6:47 am

Second hand embarrassment is knocking on the door. Please send help, lol

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