The MC and the Gayoung girl are soo frustrating. That girl IS going to be his downfall and is annoyingly stupid. Then we have the Mc who despite knowing it’s a bad idea to get close to her or the detective, he does it anyways. This story would’ve been way more interesting if he went on a rampage and escaped to some foreign land or something, I hate the usual failure/death scenario all because they started to care about someone. With this potential, could have turned out way better, we need some heartless badass MC’s. I’m tired of these naive softies. Face palm
Hisa-chan is so annoying, oke don't kill instead get yourself killed but why is he trying to control other ppl’s decisions? they're just not as naive as Hisa-chan. If there is an shounen-ai tag the mangaka better not waste my damn time with absolutely no romance, it's just regular manga. Although icchan made this whole thing better, he would be much better off dating a brute like himself instead of wasting time on him because the dynamic was just frustrating
If i had a millionare boyfriend who would chop up people for me i would fall so head over heels wouldn’t know how to act anymore~~ A bf with just one of his qualities would be good enough as well, i’m not asking much >_<
I quite liked the first story until the mangaka had too UTTERLY RUIN it with the cheap plot twist by making Atsushi bottom. I am so disappointed and kinda infuriated.. honestly people like that don't deserve to write a good story... just ughhh
If you are a new reader and new to yaoi, Tohjoh Asami is known for this style. In addition, she has long passed on so don’t speak ill of the dead.
I grew up Reading manga so pretty much my whole life i’ve been reading all type of stuff. I dont usually even start mangas witch such styles so i wasn’t familiair witch her work. Also im just critisizing not speaking ill of her, it’s a manga afterall everyone has a different opinion
So what do you mean about “ people like that” isn’t that speaking ill of someone. If you are criticizing her work then you limit it to the plot not to the person. I only called you out because you said “people like that”. There are a lot of comments below who are also voicing their surprise or dissatisfaction on how story 1 it turned out but they don’t diss the mangaka.
It’s just a sign of my disappointment in how poorly she handled a good story by selling a cheap fantasy. I’m not a fan of mangakas who ruin their stories and are insensitive towards the plot. Think however u want
What's wrong with him bottoming? That's not "some cheap plot twist" but more like "mimicking real life." Both of those are guys, both can be either top or bottom.
Lol excuse my upvote i actually meant to dislike
Same I actually wanted to dislike this shitty comment
LMAAAAOOOOOOOOO
The twin plot twist was horrible. I had to skip through everything cuz of how disgusted I was by Sarang and jinwoo. I feel so bad for Woojoung, only read the scenes with him in it. I believe things could’ve worked out between the bestfriends, it needed some time and work. His twin coming into the play was just a huge turn off...
Also all the characters were toxic lol. None of them were innocent, but some were way more unbearable than others smh
Selos ka lang kasi di ka makagawa ng ng ganyang plot :-P
how were sarang and jinwoo the disgusting one’s ?Sarang literally went through a lot,just like his brother,only that woojoung said some really fcked up shit to him.Sarang never meant to hurt him,nor did he want that all to happen,he tried his best to get close to his twin again.Woojoung was the one acting like he was the only victim.And if you didn’t like it,just don’t read it
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No, no you got a point. I HATE THEIR MOM YET NONE WAS DONE TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT. The pacing WAS horrible. Woojung got lost in the story. Nothing was mentioned how did woojung coped. Remember, Sarang WAS validated emotionally by his mother even if the family went into divorce. Woojung has to suffer being with a dad that could kill him if he ever acted gay. Because of such environment he didn’t get the education and love his mother can give him. His mother left him for SARANG. Ya get the gist? Sarang my not be the one at fault of his trauma but HE’S THE ROOT CAUSE AS TO WHY IT STARTED. SO YES, HE IS ALLOWED TO NOT ACCEPT SARANG’S EFORTS TO REPAIR THEIR RELATIONSHIP THAT EASILY. AND, WOOJUNG AND JINWOO WERE BESTFRIENDS. BESTFRIENDS mah dude, not some casual friends. I like smutty yaoi but this pacing is just... I mean come on. I honestly did run through the chapters without reading it twice, just skipped through it. The only thing good about it are sex scenes, and I can’t even focus that much to it because it reminded me that SARANG JUST FUCKED THE DUDE, PLAYED THE VICTIM CARD (he fucking did don’t lie with me the moment i saw him romanticize the acts of his first bf, went on and disregarded woojung’s feelings about homosexuality that woojung just decided to just go and find his own space to learn it himself, and acted AS HIS BROTHER ON THE FIRST PLAY BECAUSE HE JUST ASSUMED THAT BECAUSE HIS BROTHER UNDERSTOOD HIM HE’S IMMEDIATELY GAY) AND SUDDENLY THEY GOT A RELATIONSHIP. :)
Your right tnx u for ur effort explaning this..ur explanation helps me understand moree tnx u..but dude chill(⌒▽⌒) ╮(￣▽￣)╭letmehugyouguys..yallneedchillpill heheh atleast they turn happy at the end (=・ω・=)